← Show, don’t tell lesson New set →

Show Don’t Tell Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 10: Show, don’t tell · Set 173 · 40 questions
TalentJR

Writer's tip (Show the actions): A telling sentence names the feeling: was sad, felt tired. A showing sentence describes actions, faces and bodies: tears, yawns, shaking knees. Pick the showing sentence that fits the right feeling.

NameDateTime takenScore ___ / 40
  1. 1.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  2. 2.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is happy? (a) Priya was happy. (b) Priya rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers. (c) Priya hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  3. 3.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aryan was scared.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Simran’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  5. 5.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Arjun’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.”
    (a) sad (b) scared (c) hungry
  6. 6.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is scared? (a) Sahil’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (b) Sahil’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap. (c) Sahil was scared.
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is scared? (a) Manav’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter. (b) Manav’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (c) Manav was scared.
  8. 8.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Zoya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) tired (b) bored (c) scared
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is tired? (a) Aarav’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (b) Aarav was tired. (c) Aarav rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  10. 10.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aisha is scared? (a) Aisha froze and held her breath as the floor creaked. (b) Aisha was scared. (c) Aisha’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.
  11. 11.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Meera is cold? (a) Meera was cold. (b) Meera shivered and stamped her feet in the snow. (c) Meera kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Saanvi was happy.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  13. 13.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is happy? (a) Yash was happy. (b) Yash hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Yash counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  14. 14.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is tired? (a) Arjun was tired. (b) Arjun sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing. (c) Arjun’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.
  15. 15.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sahil beamed and hugged everyone in sight.”
    (a) scared (b) happy (c) sad
  16. 16.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aryan is sad? (a) Aryan was sad. (b) A tear rolled slowly down Aryan’s cheek. (c) Aryan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  17. 17.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.”
    (a) cold (b) sad (c) tired
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is sad? (a) Arjun sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Arjun was sad. (c) Tears filled Arjun’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  19. 19.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Dev shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.”
    (a) bored (b) hungry (c) cold
  20. 20.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sneha licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  21. 21.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is cold? (a) Kabir’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (b) Kabir was cold. (c) Kabir’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  22. 22.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Meera is tired? (a) Meera could barely keep her eyes open at dinner. (b) Meera was tired. (c) Meera drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.
  23. 23.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Dev is tired? (a) Dev was tired. (b) Dev froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (c) Dev could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.
  24. 24.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) sad (b) tired (c) angry
  25. 25.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is happy? (a) Manav beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (b) Manav was happy. (c) Manav dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  26. 26.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Diya is happy? (a) Diya grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (b) Diya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked. (c) Diya was happy.
  27. 27.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Neel laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) hungry (b) happy (c) cold
  28. 28.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  29. 29.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is angry? (a) Sahil drummed his fingers and stared at the clock. (b) Sahil folded his arms and glared at his brother. (c) Sahil was angry.
  30. 30.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Simran shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  31. 31.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tara threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!””
    (a) telling (b) showing
  32. 32.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is tired? (a) Kavya sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Kavya was tired. (c) Kavya dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  33. 33.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Rohan rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.”
    (a) tired (b) hungry (c) bored
  35. 35.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  36. 36.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sneha is hungry? (a) Sneha threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (b) Sneha gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (c) Sneha was hungry.
  37. 37.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Saanvi sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.”
    (a) sad (b) tired (c) scared
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aryan’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.”
    (a) tired (b) sad (c) angry
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran felt very sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  40. 40.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aryan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) telling (b) showing

Answer key

  1. showing
  2. Priya hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  3. telling
  4. showing
  5. sad
  6. Sahil’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.
  7. Manav’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  8. tired
  9. Aarav rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  10. Aisha froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  11. Meera shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.
  12. telling
  13. Yash hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  14. Arjun’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.
  15. happy
  16. A tear rolled slowly down Aryan’s cheek.
  17. cold
  18. Tears filled Arjun’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  19. cold
  20. showing
  21. Kabir’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  22. Meera could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  23. Dev could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.
  24. tired
  25. Manav beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  26. Diya grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  27. happy
  28. showing
  29. Sahil folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  30. showing
  31. showing
  32. Kavya dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  33. showing
  34. tired
  35. showing
  36. Sneha gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  37. sad
  38. tired
  39. telling
  40. showing

Free creative writing lessons, practice and worksheets at talentjr.in/creative-writing-for-kids