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Show Don’t Tell Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 10: Show, don’t tell · Set 73 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Show the actions): A telling sentence names the feeling: was sad, felt tired. A showing sentence describes actions, faces and bodies: tears, yawns, shaking knees. Pick the showing sentence that fits the right feeling.

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  1. 1.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aryan felt very cold.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  2. 2.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Simran’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  3. 3.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aryan felt very sad.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Meera is happy? (a) Meera hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Meera stamped her foot and slammed the door. (c) Meera was happy.
  5. 5.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Tara’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.”
    (a) happy (b) hungry (c) sad
  6. 6.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is scared? (a) Farhan gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut. (b) Farhan drummed his fingers and stared at the clock. (c) Farhan was scared.
  7. 7.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.”
    (a) tired (b) sad (c) bored
  8. 8.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kabir gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) tired (b) hungry (c) cold
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is bored? (a) Priya sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing. (b) Priya was bored. (c) Priya kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  10. 10.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aisha’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  11. 11.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) tired (b) hungry (c) happy
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is happy? (a) Ishaan was happy. (b) Ishaan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (c) Ishaan laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  13. 13.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is cold? (a) Fatima was cold. (b) Fatima’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet. (c) Fatima shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.
  14. 14.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  15. 15.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is angry? (a) Manav was angry. (b) Manav folded his arms and glared at his brother. (c) Manav dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  16. 16.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aisha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) scared (b) bored (c) happy
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is happy? (a) Ananya laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (b) Ananya was happy. (c) Tears filled Ananya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is angry? (a) Rohan was angry. (b) Rohan folded his arms and glared at his brother. (c) A tear rolled slowly down Rohan’s cheek.
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran felt very sad.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is cold? (a) Ishaan was cold. (b) Ishaan’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home. (c) Ishaan’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  21. 21.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is angry? (a) Rohan rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers. (b) Rohan was angry. (c) Rohan’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.
  22. 22.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Pooja shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.”
    (a) cold (b) happy (c) scared
  23. 23.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Nisha is scared? (a) Nisha’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap. (b) Nisha’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet. (c) Nisha was scared.
  24. 24.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is sad? (a) Saanvi shivered and stamped her feet in the snow. (b) Saanvi was sad. (c) Saanvi sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  25. 25.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan was really sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  26. 26.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin was cold.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  27. 27.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is bored? (a) Priya counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (b) Priya was bored. (c) Priya laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  28. 28.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Arjun felt very cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  29. 29.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is scared? (a) Aarav sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing. (b) Aarav froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (c) Aarav was scared.
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Joseph drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) sad (b) scared (c) bored
  31. 31.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ananya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  32. 32.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is happy? (a) Sahil was happy. (b) Sahil licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in. (c) Sahil hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  33. 33.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is happy? (a) Fatima was happy. (b) Fatima gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut. (c) Fatima hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.”
    (a) tired (b) bored (c) angry
  35. 35.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is scared? (a) Arjun’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (b) Arjun’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home. (c) Arjun was scared.
  36. 36.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Priya felt very bored.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Saanvi was hungry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  38. 38.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Yash kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is hungry? (a) Yash’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (b) Yash was hungry. (c) Yash rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is cold? (a) Ishaan kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard. (b) Ishaan was cold. (c) Ishaan’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.

Answer key

  1. telling
  2. showing
  3. telling
  4. Meera hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  5. sad
  6. Farhan gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  7. sad
  8. hungry
  9. Priya kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  10. showing
  11. happy
  12. Ishaan laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  13. Fatima shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.
  14. showing
  15. Manav folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  16. happy
  17. Ananya laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  18. Rohan folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  19. telling
  20. Ishaan’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  21. Rohan’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.
  22. cold
  23. Nisha’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.
  24. Saanvi sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  25. telling
  26. telling
  27. Priya counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  28. telling
  29. Aarav froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.
  30. bored
  31. showing
  32. Sahil hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  33. Fatima hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  34. bored
  35. Arjun’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  36. telling
  37. telling
  38. showing
  39. Yash’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  40. Ishaan’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.

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