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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 106 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) My father bought a new umbrella. (b) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (c) Dad is a walking dictionary.
  2. 2.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The cat ___ quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) went (b) crept (c) had
  3. 3.Which strong verb means “looked closely at something hard to see”? (a) nibbled (b) clutched (c) peered
  4. 4.Which word fits the gap best?
    “I miss my grandma so much,” ___ Joseph.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  5. 5.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sneha’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.”
    (a) sad (b) hungry (c) tired
  6. 6.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is bored? (a) Arjun kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard. (b) Tears filled Arjun’s eyes, and he stared at the floor. (c) Arjun was bored.
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is sad? (a) Manav gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (b) Manav was sad. (c) A tear rolled slowly down Manav’s cheek.
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (b) A whiff of incense floated from the temple. (c) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  9. 9.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Catch the ball___” shouted Kavya.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a full stop (.)
  10. 10.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The taxis ___ in the busy street.”
    (a) honk (b) cock-a-doodle-doo (c) neigh
  11. 11.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The library is a treasure chest of stories.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  12. 12.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The night was as dark as ink.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  13. 13.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Pooja is hungry? (a) Pooja threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (b) Pooja kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch. (c) Pooja was hungry.
  14. 14.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “The coach spoke to us from across the big field.”
    (a) gobbled (b) tiptoed (c) shouted
  15. 15.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the exam has begun,” whispered Manav. (b) “Shh, the exam has begun”, whispered Manav. (c) Shh, the exam has begun, whispered Manav.
  16. 16.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rickety ladder wobbled under Dad’s feet.”
    (a) rickety (b) ladder (c) wobbled
  17. 17.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  18. 18.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ wind howled all night.”
    (a) good (b) icy (c) okay
  19. 19.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row. (b) The warm sand tickled my toes. (c) We heard the train whistle far away.
  20. 20.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a rock”
    (a) soft (b) fluffy (c) hard
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “The river water felt icy on my feet.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) taste
  22. 22.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The girls ___ at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) giggled (b) laughed (c) did
  23. 23.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My kite is torn to pieces___” sobbed Tara.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  24. 24.Which strong verb could replace “went” in this sentence?
    “The cat went quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) crept (b) scrubbed (c) sobbed
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) fiery (b) nice (c) good
  26. 26.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Help, the boat is sinking___” shouted Simran.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a question mark (?)
  27. 27.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Manav felt very sad.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  28. 28.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “How many stars are in the sky___” asked Dev.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) baby (b) giggled (c) chubby
  30. 30.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose___” giggled Arjun.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  31. 31.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The dog barked at the postman. (b) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (c) The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  32. 32.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Nisha is sad? (a) Nisha grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (b) Nisha’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home. (c) Nisha was sad.
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) smell
  34. 34.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aarav felt very hungry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  35. 35.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Arjun laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) hungry (b) scared (c) happy
  36. 36.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Joseph hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  37. 37.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) sight
  38. 38.Which sense does this line use?
    “The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) touch
  39. 39.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) I have lost my favourite teddy, sobbed Diya. (b) “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Diya. (c) “I have lost my favourite teddy” sobbed Diya.
  40. 40.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) striped (b) fine (c) good

Answer key

  1. Dad is a walking dictionary.
  2. crept
  3. peered
  4. sobbed
  5. sad
  6. Arjun kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  7. A tear rolled slowly down Manav’s cheek.
  8. The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  9. an exclamation mark (!)
  10. honk
  11. metaphor
  12. simile
  13. Pooja kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  14. shouted
  15. “Shh, the exam has begun,” whispered Manav.
  16. rickety
  17. showing
  18. icy
  19. The warm sand tickled my toes.
  20. hard
  21. touch
  22. giggled
  23. a comma (,)
  24. crept
  25. fiery
  26. an exclamation mark (!)
  27. telling
  28. a question mark (?)
  29. chubby
  30. a comma (,)
  31. The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  32. Nisha’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.
  33. sight
  34. telling
  35. happy
  36. showing
  37. touch
  38. hearing
  39. “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Diya.
  40. striped

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