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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 113 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard waves crashing on the rocks.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch
  3. 3.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Let us keep the surprise a secret, whispered Aarav. (b) “Let us keep the surprise a secret”, whispered Aarav. (c) “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Aarav.
  4. 4.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The cat sat on the warm mat. (b) The pillow was as soft as a cloud. (c) The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  5. 5.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The raindrops went pitter-patter on the roof.”
    (a) roof (b) pitter-patter (c) raindrops
  6. 6.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I miss my grandma so much___” sobbed Dev.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  7. 7.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan was really hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  8. 8.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) window (b) neigh (c) mango
  9. 9.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The bus stopped at the school gate. (b) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder. (c) His heart was a drum during the race.
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ owl hooted from the branch.”
    (a) fine (b) speckled (c) good
  11. 11.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The frogs croak all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) monsoon (b) croak (c) frogs
  12. 12.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” ___ Diya.
    (a) whispered (b) asked (c) shouted
  13. 13.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is angry? (a) Fatima’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists. (b) Fatima counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (c) Fatima was angry.
  14. 14.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” ___ Dev.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  15. 15.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Watch out for that car”! shouted Vihaan. (b) “Watch out for that car!” shouted Vihaan. (c) “Watch out for that car” shouted Vihaan.
  16. 16.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) yellow (b) hiss (c) table
  17. 17.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The oranges fell out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) tumbled (b) scribbled (c) dashed
  18. 18.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a mouse”
    (a) huge (b) loud (c) quiet
  19. 19.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is scared? (a) Ananya was scared. (b) Tears filled Ananya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor. (c) Ananya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  20. 20.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Diya ___ her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) had (b) held (c) clutched
  21. 21.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) baby (b) giggled (c) chubby
  22. 22.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  23. 23.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The booming thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) booming (b) shook (c) thunder
  24. 24.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I miss my grandma so much___” sobbed Farhan.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  25. 25.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as grass”
    (a) green (b) red (c) loud
  26. 26.What makes the sound “oink”? (a) a snake (b) a heavy bag falling (c) a pig
  27. 27.What makes the sound “tick-tock”? (a) a clock (b) a visitor at the door (c) a steel plate falling
  28. 28.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The cat ___ quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) came (b) went (c) crept
  29. 29.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) That joke is so funny, giggled Aisha. (b) “That joke is so funny”, giggled Aisha. (c) “That joke is so funny,” giggled Aisha.
  30. 30.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as snow”
    (a) noisy (b) white (c) black
  31. 31.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” ___ Imran.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) asked
  32. 32.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The monkey ___ the banana from my hand.”
    (a) grabbed (b) came (c) took
  33. 33.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sticky jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) jalebis (b) dripped (c) sticky
  34. 34.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My sandcastle got washed away___” sobbed Arjun.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  35. 35.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  36. 36.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crispy dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) crackled (b) dosa (c) crispy
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) cheeky
  38. 38.Which strong verb means “walked unsteadily, almost falling”? (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) staggered
  39. 39.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The dry logs crackle in the campfire.”
    (a) crackle (b) dry (c) logs
  40. 40.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) showing (b) telling

Answer key

  1. hearing
  2. hearing
  3. “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Aarav.
  4. The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  5. pitter-patter
  6. a comma (,)
  7. telling
  8. neigh
  9. His heart was a drum during the race.
  10. speckled
  11. croak
  12. whispered
  13. Fatima’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  14. giggled
  15. “Watch out for that car!” shouted Vihaan.
  16. hiss
  17. tumbled
  18. quiet
  19. Ananya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  20. clutched
  21. chubby
  22. simile
  23. booming
  24. a comma (,)
  25. green
  26. a pig
  27. a clock
  28. crept
  29. “That joke is so funny,” giggled Aisha.
  30. white
  31. whispered
  32. grabbed
  33. sticky
  34. a comma (,)
  35. showing
  36. crispy
  37. cheeky
  38. staggered
  39. crackle
  40. showing

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