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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 118 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers. (b) The kitten’s fur felt like silk. (c) The train left the station at nine.
  2. 2.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) nice (b) gloomy (c) okay
  3. 3.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The old bread was as hard as a rock.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  4. 4.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) hoot (c) table
  5. 5.Which strong verb could replace “put” in this sentence?
    “Nani put sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) gobbled (b) tumbled (c) sprinkled
  6. 6.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ tree towered over the house.”
    (a) gigantic (b) nice (c) fine
  7. 7.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the exam has begun___” whispered Yash.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  8. 8.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The cow gave a long moo from the shed.”
    (a) moo (b) shed (c) cow
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Vihaan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  10. 10.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is scared? (a) Neel was scared. (b) Neel gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut. (c) Tears filled Neel’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  11. 11.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The puppy gave a happy ___ at the gate.”
    (a) croak (b) beep (c) woof
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Pooja could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  13. 13.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as grass”
    (a) red (b) green (c) loud
  14. 14.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My sandcastle got washed away,” ___ Pooja.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  15. 15.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) table (c) quack
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ bread crumbled in my fingers.”
    (a) nice (b) stale (c) okay
  17. 17.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The snake gave an angry ___ and slid away.”
    (a) thud (b) hiss (c) woof
  18. 18.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Joseph’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  19. 19.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy___” sobbed Ishaan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  20. 20.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The thunder went ___ over the hills.”
    (a) drip (b) neigh (c) boom
  21. 21.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) pop (c) tall
  22. 22.Which strong verb means “spoke very loudly”? (a) fluttered (b) shouted (c) clutched
  23. 23.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) I heard waves crashing on the rocks. (b) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (c) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  24. 24.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, we are in the library,” ___ Nisha.
    (a) whispered (b) shouted (c) asked
  25. 25.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “May I borrow your eraser___” asked Riya.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  26. 26.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Pooja’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.”
    (a) happy (b) sad (c) tired
  27. 27.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a rock”
    (a) soft (b) hard (c) fluffy
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is sad? (a) Imran was sad. (b) A tear rolled slowly down Imran’s cheek. (c) Imran hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  29. 29.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “May I borrow your eraser___” asked Kabir.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  30. 30.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  31. 31.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Zoya is happy? (a) Zoya was happy. (b) Zoya beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) A tear rolled slowly down Zoya’s cheek.
  32. 32.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “We ___ home through the deep mud.”
    (a) walked (b) came (c) trudged
  33. 33.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is hungry? (a) Aarav was hungry. (b) Aarav’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (c) Aarav kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  34. 34.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The motorbike went vroom down the road.”
    (a) motorbike (b) road (c) vroom
  35. 35.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The children ___ at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) stared (b) did (c) looked
  36. 36.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Manav felt very sad.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  38. 38.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan was angry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  39. 39.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) fine (b) okay (c) spiky
  40. 40.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pebbles sparkled in the stream.”
    (a) good (b) shiny (c) nice

Answer key

  1. The kitten’s fur felt like silk.
  2. gloomy
  3. simile
  4. hoot
  5. sprinkled
  6. gigantic
  7. a comma (,)
  8. moo
  9. showing
  10. Neel gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  11. woof
  12. showing
  13. green
  14. sobbed
  15. quack
  16. stale
  17. hiss
  18. showing
  19. a comma (,)
  20. boom
  21. pop
  22. shouted
  23. Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  24. whispered
  25. a question mark (?)
  26. tired
  27. hard
  28. A tear rolled slowly down Imran’s cheek.
  29. a question mark (?)
  30. showing
  31. Zoya beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  32. trudged
  33. Aarav kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  34. vroom
  35. stared
  36. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  37. telling
  38. telling
  39. spiky
  40. shiny

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