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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 129 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bees buzzed around the hive.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) hearing
  2. 2.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) patchwork (b) nice (c) good
  3. 3.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is sad? (a) Arjun sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing. (b) Arjun was sad. (c) Arjun’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.
  4. 4.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, the exam has begun,” ___ Imran.
    (a) asked (b) shouted (c) whispered
  5. 5.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The icy wind howled all night.”
    (a) howled (b) icy (c) wind
  6. 6.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Do not tell anyone about the party”, whispered Riya. (b) “Do not tell anyone about the party,” whispered Riya. (c) “Do not tell anyone about the party” whispered Riya.
  7. 7.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The dog barked at the postman. (b) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (c) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The clay cup felt hot in my hands. (b) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (c) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  9. 9.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a tortoise”
    (a) loud (b) fast (c) slow
  10. 10.Which sense does this line use?
    “The new bicycle shone bright red.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) taste
  11. 11.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is hungry? (a) Imran’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (b) Imran was hungry. (c) Imran’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kavya was really tired.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  13. 13.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is sad? (a) Saanvi was sad. (b) Saanvi dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (c) Saanvi sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  14. 14.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  15. 15.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) We heard the train whistle far away. (b) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (c) The lake sparkled under the full moon.
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) touch
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is scared? (a) Tenzin was scared. (b) Tenzin’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again. (c) Tenzin’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.
  18. 18.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) good (b) cheeky (c) nice
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  21. 21.What makes the sound “vroom”? (a) a motorbike (b) thunder (c) a dog
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) touch
  23. 23.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (b) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row. (c) The glue felt sticky between my fingers.
  24. 24.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The horse gave a ___ in the stable.”
    (a) neigh (b) hiss (c) baa
  25. 25.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Help, the boat is sinking” shouted Imran. (b) Help, the boat is sinking! shouted Imran. (c) “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Imran.
  26. 26.What makes the sound “pop”? (a) a cat (b) a microwave (c) a balloon
  27. 27.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Is it time for lunch yet?” ___ Aarav.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  28. 28.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (b) My little brother is a chatterbox. (c) Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crispy dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) crispy (b) dosa (c) crackled
  30. 30.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  31. 31.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The little lamb gave a soft baa.”
    (a) lamb (b) baa (c) soft
  32. 32.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil stamped his foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  33. 33.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  34. 34.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is sad? (a) Maria was sad. (b) Maria’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet. (c) Tears filled Maria’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.
  35. 35.Which strong verb could replace “cleaned” in this sentence?
    “Mum cleaned the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) fluttered (b) munched (c) scrubbed
  36. 36.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aarav’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.”
    (a) cold (b) scared (c) bored
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  38. 38.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) crackle (b) chair (c) happy
  39. 39.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) loud (b) hot (c) cold
  40. 40.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy. (b) I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall. (c) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.

Answer key

  1. hearing
  2. patchwork
  3. Arjun sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  4. whispered
  5. icy
  6. “Do not tell anyone about the party,” whispered Riya.
  7. Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  8. Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.
  9. slow
  10. sight
  11. Imran’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  12. telling
  13. Saanvi sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  14. metaphor
  15. We heard the train whistle far away.
  16. touch
  17. Tenzin’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.
  18. simile
  19. cheeky
  20. hearing
  21. a motorbike
  22. hearing
  23. The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  24. neigh
  25. “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Imran.
  26. a balloon
  27. asked
  28. Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.
  29. crispy
  30. simile
  31. baa
  32. showing
  33. simile
  34. Tears filled Maria’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.
  35. scrubbed
  36. scared
  37. showing
  38. crackle
  39. cold
  40. The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.

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