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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 135 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The sparrows chirp on my window sill.”
    (a) window (b) sparrows (c) chirp
  2. 2.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) shimmering (b) fine (c) okay
  3. 3.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Her hands were as cold as ice cubes. (b) Her bedroom is a pigsty. (c) The train left the station at nine.
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The lake sparkled under the full moon. (b) The glue felt sticky between my fingers. (c) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  5. 5.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) scrubbed (b) made (c) cleaned
  6. 6.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill. (b) His heart was a drum during the race. (c) The dog barked at the postman.
  7. 7.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The diver fell into the deep pool.”
    (a) peered (b) whispered (c) plunged
  8. 8.Which strong verb means “dived down suddenly”? (a) giggled (b) plunged (c) scrubbed
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Pooja grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  10. 10.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pigs oink in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) muddy (b) pigs (c) oink
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (b) The golden sand glittered in the sun. (c) The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  12. 12.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) walked (b) came (c) strolled
  13. 13.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kabir stamped his foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  14. 14.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Ha ha, you have milk on your nose, giggled Dev. (b) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose”, giggled Dev. (c) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Dev.
  15. 15.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” ___ Ananya.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) creaky (b) nice (c) okay
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) smell
  18. 18.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake___” whispered Sahil.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  19. 19.Which strong verb means “threw lightly”? (a) gobbled (b) blazed (c) tossed
  20. 20.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a rock”
    (a) soft (b) fluffy (c) hard
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) mysterious (b) nice (c) good
  22. 22.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “Grandpa walked through the park after dinner.”
    (a) sobbed (b) tumbled (c) strolled
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “The clay cup felt hot in my hands.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) sight
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) good (b) crispy (c) fine
  25. 25.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rusty bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) bus (b) rusty (c) rattled
  26. 26.What makes the sound “crackle”? (a) thunder (b) a campfire (c) a pair of scissors
  27. 27.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.”
    (a) scared (b) happy (c) hungry
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is scared? (a) Tenzin’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (b) Tenzin kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard. (c) Tenzin was scared.
  29. 29.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel was really sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  30. 30.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Stop that runaway goat” shouted Tara. (b) “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Tara. (c) “Stop that runaway goat”! shouted Tara.
  31. 31.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (b) The snail felt slimy on my palm. (c) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  32. 32.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cuddly teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) sat (b) cuddly (c) bear
  33. 33.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (b) The fog was a grey curtain over the town. (c) The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  34. 34.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is happy? (a) Ananya was happy. (b) Ananya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked. (c) Ananya laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  35. 35.Which sense does this line use?
    “The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) sight
  37. 37.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The camera went ___ at the party.”
    (a) tick-tock (b) click (c) slurp
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Yash’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.”
    (a) cold (b) hungry (c) happy
  39. 39.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The microwave gave a beep when the milk was hot.”
    (a) beep (b) microwave (c) milk
  40. 40.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The tired runner ___ over the finish line.”
    (a) walked (b) made (c) staggered

Answer key

  1. chirp
  2. shimmering
  3. Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.
  4. The lake sparkled under the full moon.
  5. scrubbed
  6. The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  7. plunged
  8. plunged
  9. showing
  10. oink
  11. The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  12. strolled
  13. showing
  14. “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Dev.
  15. giggled
  16. creaky
  17. smell
  18. a comma (,)
  19. tossed
  20. hard
  21. mysterious
  22. strolled
  23. touch
  24. crispy
  25. rusty
  26. a campfire
  27. scared
  28. Tenzin’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  29. telling
  30. “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Tara.
  31. The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.
  32. cuddly
  33. The fog was a grey curtain over the town.
  34. Ananya laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  35. hearing
  36. sight
  37. click
  38. cold
  39. beep
  40. staggered

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