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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 14 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) taste
  2. 2.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ wind howled all night.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) icy
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch
  4. 4.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) fine (b) okay (c) shaggy
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Priya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  6. 6.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Your silly face makes me laugh” giggled Aisha. (b) “Your silly face makes me laugh”, giggled Aisha. (c) “Your silly face makes me laugh,” giggled Aisha.
  7. 7.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) beep (c) garden
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  9. 9.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) taste
  10. 10.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Meera watered the plants in the morning.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  11. 11.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) yellow (b) quickly (c) crunch
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “I looked at the white peak of the mountain.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) smell
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) narrow
  14. 14.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night. (b) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (c) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  15. 15.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Imran’s cheek.”
    (a) sad (b) tired (c) scared
  16. 16.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock, giggled Zoya. (b) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock” giggled Zoya. (c) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Zoya.
  17. 17.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The blooming garden smelled of roses.”
    (a) smelled (b) blooming (c) garden
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Pooja is sad? (a) Pooja sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing. (b) Pooja was sad. (c) Pooja dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  19. 19.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The sun was a golden ball of fire. (b) The pillow was as soft as a cloud. (c) We ate rice and dal for dinner.
  20. 20.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) slow (b) soft (c) brave
  21. 21.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) I heard waves crashing on the rocks. (b) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (c) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  22. 22.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” ___ Fatima.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  23. 23.Which strong verb means “burned brightly and fiercely”? (a) gobbled (b) leapt (c) blazed
  24. 24.Which strong verb means “laughed in a light, silly way”? (a) crawled (b) munched (c) giggled
  25. 25.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap, whispered Dev. (b) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap” whispered Dev. (c) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Dev.
  26. 26.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The kitten’s fur felt like silk. (b) It rained all night in our town. (c) The playground was an oven in May.
  27. 27.What makes the sound “oink”? (a) thunder (b) a pig (c) a doorbell
  28. 28.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) quack (c) river
  29. 29.What makes the sound “hoot”? (a) an owl (b) a frog (c) a car horn
  30. 30.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Meera is tired? (a) Meera was tired. (b) Meera rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers. (c) Meera dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  31. 31.Which strong verb means “took hold of quickly and roughly”? (a) crawled (b) grabbed (c) leapt
  32. 32.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The bees ___ around the mango flowers.”
    (a) pop (b) buzz (c) moo
  33. 33.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Our cat lets out a sad meow at night.”
    (a) night (b) meow (c) cat
  34. 34.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The earth smelled lovely after the first rain. (b) The medicine had a bitter taste. (c) Lightning flashed across the night sky.
  35. 35.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My sandcastle got washed away___” sobbed Rohan.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) sight
  37. 37.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is angry? (a) Kabir was angry. (b) Kabir rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa. (c) Kabir threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!”
  38. 38.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel was bored.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  39. 39.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  40. 40.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) good (b) dazzling (c) fine

Answer key

  1. sight
  2. icy
  3. hearing
  4. shaggy
  5. showing
  6. “Your silly face makes me laugh,” giggled Aisha.
  7. beep
  8. showing
  9. smell
  10. neither
  11. crunch
  12. sight
  13. narrow
  14. The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  15. sad
  16. “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Zoya.
  17. blooming
  18. Pooja sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  19. The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  20. brave
  21. I heard waves crashing on the rocks.
  22. asked
  23. blazed
  24. giggled
  25. “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Dev.
  26. The playground was an oven in May.
  27. a pig
  28. quack
  29. an owl
  30. Meera dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  31. grabbed
  32. buzz
  33. meow
  34. Lightning flashed across the night sky.
  35. a comma (,)
  36. smell
  37. Kabir threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!”
  38. telling
  39. The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  40. dazzling

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