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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 146 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.What makes the sound “baa”? (a) a sparrow (b) a sheep (c) a bee
  2. 2.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake” whispered Tara. (b) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake”, whispered Tara. (c) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Tara.
  3. 3.What makes the sound “cock-a-doodle-doo”? (a) a noisy drinker (b) a heavy bag falling (c) a rooster
  4. 4.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The traffic jam was a long metal snake.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (b) The new bicycle shone bright red. (c) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  6. 6.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Diya ___ her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) clutched (b) held (c) went
  7. 7.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an owl”
    (a) foolish (b) wise (c) silly
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The golden sand glittered in the sun. (b) I felt the cool breeze on my face. (c) The fish market had a strong smell.
  9. 9.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “We ___ home through the deep mud.”
    (a) trudged (b) walked (c) had
  10. 10.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The motorbike went vroom down the road.”
    (a) road (b) motorbike (c) vroom
  11. 11.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleepy lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) lion (b) sleepy (c) dozed
  12. 12.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) click (b) happy (c) green
  13. 13.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The two friends ___ to the gate to see who was fastest.”
    (a) raced (b) ran (c) came
  14. 14.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) cushion (b) squishy (c) sank
  15. 15.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) okay (b) golden (c) good
  16. 16.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (b) The sea tasted very salty. (c) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is sad? (a) Riya gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut. (b) Riya was sad. (c) Riya sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  18. 18.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Manav. (b) “Can I have one more laddoo, please” asked Manav. (c) Can I have one more laddoo, please? asked Manav.
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Yash hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  20. 20.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) hoot (c) yellow
  21. 21.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The golden sand glittered in the sun. (b) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (c) The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  22. 22.Which strong verb means “scattered tiny bits over something”? (a) clutched (b) sprinkled (c) tumbled
  23. 23.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (b) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (c) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.
  24. 24.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The ducks ___ noisily near the pond.”
    (a) boom (b) quack (c) roar
  25. 25.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My goldfish has gone missing,” ___ Fatima.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  26. 26.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aarav was happy.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  27. 27.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is cold? (a) Riya was cold. (b) Riya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again. (c) Riya’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.
  28. 28.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Watch out for that car!” shouted Vihaan. (b) “Watch out for that car” shouted Vihaan. (c) Watch out for that car! shouted Vihaan.
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard waves crashing on the rocks.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) touch
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Yash’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.”
    (a) scared (b) sad (c) angry
  31. 31.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Our teacher is a fountain of ideas.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  32. 32.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “Meera ran to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) sobbed (b) slammed (c) dashed
  33. 33.Which strong verb could replace “jumped” in this sentence?
    “The deer jumped over the fallen log.”
    (a) munched (b) leapt (c) muttered
  34. 34.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is cold? (a) Joseph folded his arms and glared at his brother. (b) Joseph’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap. (c) Joseph was cold.
  35. 35.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The muddy pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) muddy (b) had (c) pond
  36. 36.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) got (b) drank (c) sipped
  37. 37.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises. (b) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (c) The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  38. 38.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The bus stopped at the school gate. (b) The tired dog snored like a tractor. (c) The playground was an oven in May.
  39. 39.Which strong verb could replace “took” in this sentence?
    “The monkey took the banana from my hand.”
    (a) soared (b) grabbed (c) dashed
  40. 40.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Joseph gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.”
    (a) tired (b) angry (c) scared

Answer key

  1. a sheep
  2. “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Tara.
  3. a rooster
  4. metaphor
  5. The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.
  6. clutched
  7. wise
  8. I felt the cool breeze on my face.
  9. trudged
  10. vroom
  11. sleepy
  12. click
  13. raced
  14. squishy
  15. golden
  16. Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  17. Riya sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  18. “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Manav.
  19. showing
  20. hoot
  21. The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  22. sprinkled
  23. The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.
  24. quack
  25. sobbed
  26. telling
  27. Riya’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.
  28. “Watch out for that car!” shouted Vihaan.
  29. hearing
  30. sad
  31. metaphor
  32. dashed
  33. leapt
  34. Joseph’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  35. muddy
  36. sipped
  37. The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  38. The playground was an oven in May.
  39. grabbed
  40. scared

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