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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 159 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The train left the station at nine. (b) Her smile was as bright as the sun. (c) Her bedroom is a pigsty.
  2. 2.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a tortoise”
    (a) fast (b) loud (c) slow
  3. 3.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Can I have one more laddoo, please” asked Ishaan. (b) “Can I have one more laddoo, please”? asked Ishaan. (c) “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Ishaan.
  4. 4.Which sentence is a simile? (a) It rained all night in our town. (b) The water was as clear as glass. (c) The stars were diamonds in the night sky.
  5. 5.Which strong verb could replace “went” in this sentence?
    “The cat went quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) plunged (b) scribbled (c) crept
  6. 6.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is bored? (a) Farhan was bored. (b) Farhan laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (c) Farhan sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is tired? (a) Joseph was tired. (b) Joseph gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut. (c) Joseph dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  8. 8.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pakoras sizzle in the hot oil.”
    (a) oil (b) pakoras (c) sizzle
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aryan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  10. 10.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kabir stamped his foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) sad (b) angry (c) happy
  11. 11.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Why is the sky blue?” ___ Farhan.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) taste
  13. 13.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) fluttered (b) peered (c) dashed
  14. 14.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The little lamb gave a soft baa.”
    (a) soft (b) baa (c) lamb
  15. 15.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The steaming soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) soup (b) steaming (c) filled
  16. 16.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Why is the sky blue?” ___ Riya.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Vihaan is bored? (a) Vihaan was bored. (b) Vihaan’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home. (c) Vihaan kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  18. 18.Which sense does this line use?
    “The medicine had a bitter taste.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) sight
  19. 19.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) buzz (b) chair (c) gentle
  20. 20.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Kabir finished his homework early. (b) The kitten’s fur felt like silk. (c) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.
  21. 21.What makes the sound “slurp”? (a) a noisy drinker (b) a car horn (c) a cow
  22. 22.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sneha drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) hungry (b) cold (c) bored
  23. 23.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The steel plate hit the stone floor with a ___.”
    (a) clang (b) crackle (c) whoosh
  24. 24.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sour lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) sour (b) pull (c) lemon
  25. 25.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) hot (b) loud (c) cold
  26. 26.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The camera went click at the party.”
    (a) party (b) click (c) camera
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleek car zoomed past us.”
    (a) car (b) zoomed (c) sleek
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “The warm sand tickled my toes.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) smell
  29. 29.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is happy? (a) Sahil laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (b) A tear rolled slowly down Sahil’s cheek. (c) Sahil was happy.
  30. 30.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Dad gave a loud ___ in the dusty room.”
    (a) achoo (b) pitter-patter (c) hoot
  31. 31.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) good (b) sour (c) fine
  32. 32.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “The bowler threw the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) sprinkled (b) hurled (c) soared
  33. 33.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Meera ___ to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) dashed (b) ran (c) made
  34. 34.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) fine (b) tiny (c) good
  35. 35.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  36. 36.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Simran drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) angry (b) bored (c) cold
  37. 37.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Simran’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.”
    (a) scared (b) bored (c) sad
  38. 38.Which strong verb means “walked quietly on your toes”? (a) tiptoed (b) nibbled (c) muttered
  39. 39.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.”
    (a) hungry (b) happy (c) tired
  40. 40.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The feather was as light as air. (b) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (c) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.

Answer key

  1. Her bedroom is a pigsty.
  2. slow
  3. “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Ishaan.
  4. The water was as clear as glass.
  5. crept
  6. Farhan sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  7. Joseph dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  8. sizzle
  9. showing
  10. angry
  11. asked
  12. smell
  13. dashed
  14. baa
  15. steaming
  16. asked
  17. Vihaan kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  18. taste
  19. buzz
  20. The kitten’s fur felt like silk.
  21. a noisy drinker
  22. bored
  23. clang
  24. sour
  25. cold
  26. click
  27. sleek
  28. touch
  29. Sahil laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  30. achoo
  31. sour
  32. hurled
  33. dashed
  34. tiny
  35. simile
  36. bored
  37. sad
  38. tiptoed
  39. hungry
  40. The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.

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