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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 189 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The narrow road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) road (b) twisted (c) narrow
  2. 2.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “We heard a loud ___ at the front door.”
    (a) beep (b) quack (c) knock
  3. 3.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  4. 4.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Look out, the shelf is falling___” shouted Farhan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a full stop (.)
  5. 5.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” ___ Tenzin.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  6. 6.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My sandcastle got washed away”, sobbed Tenzin. (b) My sandcastle got washed away, sobbed Tenzin. (c) “My sandcastle got washed away,” sobbed Tenzin.
  7. 7.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost child ___ until his mother found him.”
    (a) sobbed (b) made (c) cried
  8. 8.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My kite is torn to pieces,” ___ Sahil.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  9. 9.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (b) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (c) The river water felt icy on my feet.
  10. 10.Which sense does this line use?
    “The golden sand glittered in the sun.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  11. 11.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sticky jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) jalebis (b) dripped (c) sticky
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ananya was bored.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  13. 13.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is tired? (a) Priya’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists. (b) Priya was tired. (c) Priya dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The new bicycle shone bright red.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) sight
  15. 15.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (b) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty. (c) The bees buzzed around the hive.
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) sight
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch
  18. 18.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) soft (b) slow (c) brave
  19. 19.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “After the race, Kabir drank a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) trudged (b) gulped (c) hurled
  20. 20.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) creaky (b) good (c) okay
  21. 21.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The diver ___ into the deep pool.”
    (a) fell (b) plunged (c) did
  22. 22.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “The eagle flew above the hills.”
    (a) clutched (b) tiptoed (c) soared
  23. 23.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The snake gave an angry ___ and slid away.”
    (a) beep (b) moo (c) hiss
  24. 24.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chirp (b) happy (c) green
  25. 25.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tara is scared? (a) Tara drummed her fingers and stared at the clock. (b) Tara froze and held her breath as the floor creaked. (c) Tara was scared.
  26. 26.Which strong verb means “took hold of quickly and roughly”? (a) tiptoed (b) munched (c) grabbed
  27. 27.Which strong verb means “wrote quickly and untidily”? (a) stared (b) scribbled (c) sprinkled
  28. 28.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall. (b) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty. (c) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  29. 29.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The bus stopped at the school gate.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  30. 30.What makes the sound “croak”? (a) a noisy drinker (b) a pig (c) a frog
  31. 31.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleepy lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) dozed (b) lion (c) sleepy
  32. 32.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The creaky stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) groaned (b) creaky (c) stairs
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  34. 34.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aarav sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  35. 35.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The diver fell into the deep pool.”
    (a) trudged (b) plunged (c) blazed
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) touch
  37. 37.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The snow was a white blanket on the hills. (b) It rained all night in our town. (c) Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.
  38. 38.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) muddy
  39. 39.Which strong verb could replace “held” in this sentence?
    “Diya held her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) sipped (b) crept (c) clutched
  40. 40.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin felt very hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling

Answer key

  1. narrow
  2. knock
  3. simile
  4. an exclamation mark (!)
  5. giggled
  6. “My sandcastle got washed away,” sobbed Tenzin.
  7. sobbed
  8. sobbed
  9. The river water felt icy on my feet.
  10. sight
  11. sticky
  12. telling
  13. Priya dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  14. sight
  15. The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.
  16. hearing
  17. sight
  18. brave
  19. gulped
  20. creaky
  21. plunged
  22. soared
  23. hiss
  24. chirp
  25. Tara froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  26. grabbed
  27. scribbled
  28. The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  29. neither
  30. a frog
  31. sleepy
  32. creaky
  33. sight
  34. showing
  35. plunged
  36. smell
  37. Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.
  38. muddy
  39. clutched
  40. telling

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