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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 213 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Pooja hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  2. 2.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) mango (c) meow
  3. 3.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Grab the rope”! shouted Sneha. (b) “Grab the rope!” shouted Sneha. (c) “Grab the rope” shouted Sneha.
  4. 4.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The children jumped into the pool with a ___.”
    (a) click (b) splash (c) clang
  5. 5.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Arjun hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) angry (b) happy (c) tired
  6. 6.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) table (c) vroom
  7. 7.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an ox”
    (a) strong (b) tiny (c) weak
  8. 8.Which strong verb could replace “cried” in this sentence?
    “The lost child cried until his mother found him.”
    (a) scribbled (b) sobbed (c) clutched
  9. 9.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Diya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) angry (b) hungry (c) scared
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) narrow
  11. 11.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as glass”
    (a) clear (b) muddy (c) soft
  12. 12.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The horse gave a ___ in the stable.”
    (a) crunch (b) thud (c) neigh
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) fine (b) okay (c) spiky
  14. 14.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  15. 15.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, the film is starting,” ___ Maria.
    (a) shouted (b) asked (c) whispered
  16. 16.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus. (b) The dog barked at the postman. (c) The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bees buzzed around the hive.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  18. 18.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) cushion (b) squishy (c) sank
  19. 19.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The sun was a golden ball of fire.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  20. 20.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Can I have one more laddoo, please? asked Vihaan. (b) “Can I have one more laddoo, please”? asked Vihaan. (c) “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Vihaan.
  21. 21.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” ___ Joseph.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  22. 22.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “May I borrow your eraser___” asked Kabir.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  23. 23.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aisha gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) hungry (b) tired (c) sad
  24. 24.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “The bowler threw the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) hurled (b) gobbled (c) stared
  25. 25.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The polished floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) floor (b) squeaked (c) polished
  26. 26.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh. (b) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (c) The new bicycle shone bright red.
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cuddly teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) cuddly (b) bear (c) sat
  28. 28.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a ___.”
    (a) pop (b) splash (c) slurp
  29. 29.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “We ate rice and dal for dinner.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  30. 30.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Help, the boat is sinking!” ___ Ishaan.
    (a) shouted (b) giggled (c) whispered
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) sight
  32. 32.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ car zoomed past us.”
    (a) sleek (b) good (c) fine
  33. 33.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Stop that runaway goat”! shouted Aisha. (b) “Stop that runaway goat” shouted Aisha. (c) “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Aisha.
  34. 34.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “Riya ate a crunchy apple on the bus.”
    (a) munched (b) hurled (c) muttered
  35. 35.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) hearing
  36. 36.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Nobody came to my party,” ___ Rohan.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  37. 37.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, the exam has begun, whispered Maria. (b) “Shh, the exam has begun”, whispered Maria. (c) “Shh, the exam has begun,” whispered Maria.
  38. 38.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My goldfish has gone missing,” ___ Farhan.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is sad? (a) Maria’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home. (b) Maria dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (c) Maria was sad.
  40. 40.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Is it time for lunch yet___” asked Farhan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)

Answer key

  1. showing
  2. meow
  3. “Grab the rope!” shouted Sneha.
  4. splash
  5. happy
  6. vroom
  7. strong
  8. sobbed
  9. scared
  10. narrow
  11. clear
  12. neigh
  13. spiky
  14. showing
  15. whispered
  16. The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  17. hearing
  18. squishy
  19. metaphor
  20. “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Vihaan.
  21. giggled
  22. a question mark (?)
  23. hungry
  24. hurled
  25. polished
  26. Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  27. cuddly
  28. slurp
  29. neither
  30. shouted
  31. smell
  32. sleek
  33. “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Aisha.
  34. munched
  35. touch
  36. sobbed
  37. “Shh, the exam has begun,” whispered Maria.
  38. sobbed
  39. Maria’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.
  40. a question mark (?)

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