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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 216 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (b) The temple bells rang out loudly. (c) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.
  2. 2.What makes the sound “pop”? (a) a doorbell (b) a balloon (c) a microwave
  3. 3.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ garden smelled of roses.”
    (a) nice (b) blooming (c) okay
  4. 4.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (b) The traffic jam was a long metal snake. (c) The children played cricket after school.
  5. 5.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The thunder went ___ over the hills.”
    (a) boom (b) buzz (c) croak
  6. 6.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (b) The baby slept like a log. (c) The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  7. 7.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) sticky
  8. 8.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is hungry? (a) Riya was hungry. (b) Riya hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Riya licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  9. 9.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) juicy (b) good (c) okay
  10. 10.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Who painted this lovely picture?” ___ Priya.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  11. 11.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The tired runner walked over the finish line.”
    (a) gobbled (b) clutched (c) staggered
  12. 12.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) silent (b) lazy (c) busy
  13. 13.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “Grandpa walked through the park after dinner.”
    (a) slammed (b) hurled (c) strolled
  14. 14.Which strong verb means “flapped its wings quickly and lightly”? (a) strolled (b) fluttered (c) trudged
  15. 15.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “The two friends ran to the gate to see who was fastest.”
    (a) muttered (b) raced (c) peered
  16. 16.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The naughty puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) puppy (b) naughty (c) chewed
  17. 17.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) dashed (b) whispered (c) blazed
  18. 18.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) hungry (b) sad (c) happy
  19. 19.Which sense does this line use?
    “Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) sight
  20. 20.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (b) Her smile was as bright as the sun. (c) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  21. 21.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is happy? (a) Aarav grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (b) Aarav was happy. (c) Tears filled Aarav’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  22. 22.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (b) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (c) I felt the cool breeze on my face.
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “The new bicycle shone bright red.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) sight
  24. 24.Which strong verb means “ate very fast and greedily”? (a) tiptoed (b) whispered (c) gobbled
  25. 25.What makes the sound “drip”? (a) a leaking tap (b) a cat (c) a campfire
  26. 26.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The ducks ___ noisily near the pond.”
    (a) quack (b) beep (c) chirp
  27. 27.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tick-tock (b) pencil (c) tall
  28. 28.What makes the sound “hiss”? (a) the wind (b) a sneeze (c) a snake
  29. 29.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Zoya. (b) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose”, giggled Zoya. (c) Hee hee, that clown has a red nose, giggled Zoya.
  30. 30.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My kite is torn to pieces,” ___ Farhan.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  31. 31.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ clouds floated across the sky.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) puffy
  32. 32.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” ___ Dev.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  33. 33.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  34. 34.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley. (b) The dog barked at the postman. (c) The tired dog snored like a tractor.
  35. 35.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a ___.”
    (a) slurp (b) achoo (c) crackle
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) smell
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  38. 38.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is bored? (a) Aarav was bored. (b) Aarav grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (c) Aarav counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  39. 39.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a slurp.”
    (a) drank (b) lassi (c) slurp
  40. 40.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) We heard the train whistle far away. (b) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (c) The cactus was prickly when I touched it.

Answer key

  1. The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.
  2. a balloon
  3. blooming
  4. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  5. boom
  6. The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  7. sticky
  8. Riya licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  9. juicy
  10. asked
  11. staggered
  12. busy
  13. strolled
  14. fluttered
  15. raced
  16. naughty
  17. dashed
  18. happy
  19. sight
  20. Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  21. Aarav grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  22. The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  23. sight
  24. gobbled
  25. a leaking tap
  26. quack
  27. tick-tock
  28. a snake
  29. “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Zoya.
  30. sobbed
  31. puffy
  32. giggled
  33. metaphor
  34. The tired dog snored like a tractor.
  35. slurp
  36. touch
  37. showing
  38. Aarav counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  39. slurp
  40. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.

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