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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 228 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (b) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row. (c) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  2. 2.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) nice (b) sour (c) fine
  3. 3.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The bees buzzed around the hive. (b) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (c) A whiff of incense floated from the temple.
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (b) The bees buzzed around the hive. (c) The new bicycle shone bright red.
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) A whistle blew at the start of the race. (b) The river water felt icy on my feet. (c) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.
  6. 6.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Help, the boat is sinking!” ___ Meera.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) giggled
  7. 7.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The old door creaked as it opened. (b) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  8. 8.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) cheeky
  9. 9.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) hoot (b) mango (c) quickly
  10. 10.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The leaking tap went drip in the dark.”
    (a) tap (b) dark (c) drip
  11. 11.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” ___ Aisha.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  12. 12.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The juicy mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) mangoes (b) filled (c) juicy
  13. 13.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan was angry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  14. 14.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Simran is cold? (a) Simran gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (b) Simran was cold. (c) Simran shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.
  15. 15.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) drank (b) sipped (c) did
  16. 16.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Dev is happy? (a) Dev was happy. (b) Dev beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Dev froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.
  17. 17.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “Rohan spoke crossly under his breath.”
    (a) muttered (b) trudged (c) sipped
  18. 18.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tall (b) green (c) slurp
  19. 19.Which sense does this line use?
    “Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) touch
  20. 20.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The polished floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) polished (b) floor (c) squeaked
  21. 21.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall. (b) The glue felt sticky between my fingers. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  22. 22.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The children jumped into the pool with a ___.”
    (a) splash (b) achoo (c) moo
  23. 23.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) bitter (b) sweet (c) sour
  24. 24.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The puppy gave a happy woof at the gate.”
    (a) puppy (b) gate (c) woof
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) enormous (b) okay (c) good
  26. 26.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sticky jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) sticky (b) dripped (c) jalebis
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whiff of incense floated from the temple.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) smell
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) hearing
  29. 29.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aryan is tired? (a) Aryan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (b) Aryan was tired. (c) Aryan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  30. 30.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (b) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (c) The clay cup felt hot in my hands.
  31. 31.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Pooja is hungry? (a) A tear rolled slowly down Pooja’s cheek. (b) Pooja was hungry. (c) Pooja’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  32. 32.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet___” giggled Imran.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  33. 33.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh. (b) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  34. 34.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The tired dog snored like a tractor.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  35. 35.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Vihaan sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  36. 36.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The snake gave an angry hiss and slid away.”
    (a) angry (b) hiss (c) snake
  37. 37.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chair (b) oink (c) table
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tenzin froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) scared (b) sad (c) hungry
  39. 39.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The doorbell went ding-dong at noon.”
    (a) noon (b) doorbell (c) ding-dong
  40. 40.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The snake gave an angry ___ and slid away.”
    (a) meow (b) roar (c) hiss

Answer key

  1. Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  2. sour
  3. A whiff of incense floated from the temple.
  4. The new bicycle shone bright red.
  5. Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.
  6. shouted
  7. The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  8. cheeky
  9. hoot
  10. drip
  11. asked
  12. juicy
  13. telling
  14. Simran shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.
  15. sipped
  16. Dev beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  17. muttered
  18. slurp
  19. sight
  20. polished
  21. The glue felt sticky between my fingers.
  22. splash
  23. sweet
  24. woof
  25. enormous
  26. sticky
  27. smell
  28. taste
  29. Aryan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  30. The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  31. Pooja’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  32. a comma (,)
  33. The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.
  34. simile
  35. showing
  36. hiss
  37. oink
  38. scared
  39. ding-dong
  40. hiss

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