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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 235 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which strong verb means “swallowed quickly in big mouthfuls”? (a) leapt (b) gulped (c) soared
  2. 2.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen. (b) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night. (c) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  3. 3.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “We ate rice and dal for dinner.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  4. 4.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sneha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) bored (b) happy (c) hungry
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is hungry? (a) Maria was hungry. (b) Maria rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa. (c) Maria’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  6. 6.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is angry? (a) Tenzin could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (b) Tenzin was angry. (c) Tenzin’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.
  7. 7.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Run, the bus is leaving! shouted Vihaan. (b) “Run, the bus is leaving” shouted Vihaan. (c) “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Vihaan.
  8. 8.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Your silly face makes me laugh___” giggled Imran.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  9. 9.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “A butterfly ___ from flower to flower.”
    (a) flew (b) fluttered (c) had
  10. 10.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The spiky cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) cactus (b) spiky (c) pricked
  11. 11.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the exam has begun___” whispered Farhan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is angry? (a) Imran was angry. (b) Imran’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists. (c) Imran laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) good (b) sleepy (c) nice
  14. 14.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Nani ___ sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) made (b) put (c) sprinkled
  15. 15.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleepy lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) sleepy (b) dozed (c) lion
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “The medicine had a bitter taste.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  17. 17.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) fiery (b) okay (c) fine
  18. 18.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) feathery
  19. 19.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Her bedroom is a pigsty.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  20. 20.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The playground was an oven in May. (b) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (c) The wrestler was as strong as an ox.
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “The thunder crashed and roared.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) smell
  22. 22.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, the film is starting,” ___ Dev.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) asked
  23. 23.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) got (b) drank (c) sipped
  24. 24.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch
  25. 25.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The motorbike went vroom down the road.”
    (a) motorbike (b) vroom (c) road
  26. 26.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Dad is a walking dictionary. (b) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (c) We ate rice and dal for dinner.
  27. 27.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Why is the sky blue___” asked Aisha.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is scared? (a) Manav’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (b) Manav was scared. (c) Manav stamped his foot and slammed the door.
  29. 29.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ wind howled all night.”
    (a) nice (b) icy (c) good
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aarav’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) tired
  31. 31.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The water was as clear as glass. (b) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (c) The lake was a mirror for the mountains.
  32. 32.What makes the sound “splash”? (a) a jump into a pool (b) a car horn (c) a pig
  33. 33.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Is it time for lunch yet?” ___ Aisha.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  34. 34.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The polished floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) squeaked (b) floor (c) polished
  35. 35.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I have lost my favourite teddy” sobbed Diya. (b) “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Diya. (c) I have lost my favourite teddy, sobbed Diya.
  36. 36.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “The coach spoke to us from across the big field.”
    (a) blazed (b) shouted (c) crept
  37. 37.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  38. 38.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (b) The playground was an oven in May. (c) My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  39. 39.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Yash’s cheek.”
    (a) sad (b) cold (c) scared
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is cold? (a) Manav was cold. (b) Manav’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (c) Manav rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.

Answer key

  1. gulped
  2. Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  3. neither
  4. happy
  5. Maria’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  6. Tenzin’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.
  7. “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Vihaan.
  8. a comma (,)
  9. fluttered
  10. spiky
  11. a comma (,)
  12. Imran’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.
  13. sleepy
  14. sprinkled
  15. sleepy
  16. taste
  17. fiery
  18. feathery
  19. metaphor
  20. The wrestler was as strong as an ox.
  21. hearing
  22. whispered
  23. sipped
  24. sight
  25. vroom
  26. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  27. a question mark (?)
  28. Manav’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.
  29. icy
  30. tired
  31. The water was as clear as glass.
  32. a jump into a pool
  33. asked
  34. polished
  35. “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Diya.
  36. shouted
  37. simile
  38. The playground was an oven in May.
  39. sad
  40. Manav rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.

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