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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 237 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word fits the gap best?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy,” ___ Ananya.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  2. 2.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Zoya was really happy.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  3. 3.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Nisha is happy? (a) Nisha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Nisha was happy. (c) Nisha licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  4. 4.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as glass”
    (a) soft (b) clear (c) muddy
  5. 5.Which word fits the gap best?
    “May I borrow your eraser?” ___ Arjun.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  6. 6.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Vihaan was cold.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  7. 7.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) lazy (b) busy (c) silent
  8. 8.Which sense does this line use?
    “Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) smell
  9. 9.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “The bowler threw the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) trudged (b) scribbled (c) hurled
  10. 10.What makes the sound “splash”? (a) a heavy bag falling (b) a motorbike (c) a jump into a pool
  11. 11.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Diya drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) bored (b) tired (c) sad
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “The new bicycle shone bright red.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) sight
  13. 13.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The lion let out a mighty roar.”
    (a) mighty (b) roar (c) lion
  14. 14.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a mouse”
    (a) loud (b) huge (c) quiet
  15. 15.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The eagle ___ above the hills.”
    (a) flew (b) got (c) soared
  16. 16.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The dry logs crackle in the campfire.”
    (a) logs (b) dry (c) crackle
  17. 17.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Come back here, Moti___” shouted Manav.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a question mark (?)
  18. 18.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The kitten’s fur felt like silk.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  19. 19.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The puppy gave a happy woof at the gate.”
    (a) puppy (b) woof (c) gate
  20. 20.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The children played cricket after school.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) good (b) fiery (c) fine
  22. 22.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (b) The cat sat on the warm mat. (c) His heart was a drum during the race.
  23. 23.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pakoras ___ in the hot oil.”
    (a) thud (b) neigh (c) sizzle
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The sea tasted very salty. (b) The fish market had a strong smell. (c) The thunder crashed and roared.
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) good (b) polished (c) fine
  26. 26.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) slow (b) brave (c) soft
  27. 27.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as grass”
    (a) loud (b) red (c) green
  28. 28.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The sparrows chirp on my window sill.”
    (a) sparrows (b) chirp (c) window
  29. 29.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ car zoomed past us.”
    (a) good (b) okay (c) sleek
  30. 30.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Our cat lets out a sad meow at night.”
    (a) cat (b) night (c) meow
  31. 31.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Simran is cold? (a) Simran gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut. (b) Simran’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap. (c) Simran was cold.
  32. 32.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Is it time for lunch yet?” ___ Priya.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  33. 33.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) river (b) buzz (c) gentle
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wet soap slipped from my hands.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) sight
  35. 35.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The speckled owl hooted from the branch.”
    (a) owl (b) hooted (c) speckled
  36. 36.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ clouds floated across the sky.”
    (a) fine (b) good (c) puffy
  37. 37.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tenzin’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.”
    (a) scared (b) sad (c) tired
  38. 38.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Pooja is sad? (a) Pooja was sad. (b) Pooja gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut. (c) Pooja’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sneha felt very scared.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  40. 40.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The clay cup felt hot in my hands. (b) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.

Answer key

  1. sobbed
  2. telling
  3. Nisha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  4. clear
  5. asked
  6. telling
  7. busy
  8. sight
  9. hurled
  10. a jump into a pool
  11. bored
  12. sight
  13. roar
  14. quiet
  15. soared
  16. crackle
  17. an exclamation mark (!)
  18. simile
  19. woof
  20. neither
  21. fiery
  22. His heart was a drum during the race.
  23. sizzle
  24. The sea tasted very salty.
  25. polished
  26. brave
  27. green
  28. chirp
  29. sleek
  30. meow
  31. Simran’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.
  32. asked
  33. buzz
  34. touch
  35. speckled
  36. puffy
  37. tired
  38. Pooja’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.
  39. telling
  40. The clay cup felt hot in my hands.

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