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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 247 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Rohan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) tired (b) happy (c) sad
  2. 2.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as grass”
    (a) loud (b) red (c) green
  3. 3.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) sour (b) sweet (c) bitter
  4. 4.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the film is starting___” whispered Kabir.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  5. 5.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ tree towered over the house.”
    (a) gigantic (b) okay (c) fine
  6. 6.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  7. 7.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Help, the boat is sinking___” shouted Rohan.
    (a) an exclamation mark (!) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The new bicycle shone bright red. (b) The earth smelled lovely after the first rain. (c) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  9. 9.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The icy wind howled all night.”
    (a) howled (b) icy (c) wind
  10. 10.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) giggled (b) baby (c) chubby
  11. 11.Which sense does this line use?
    “The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) taste
  12. 12.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The wind went whoosh through the trees.”
    (a) trees (b) whoosh (c) wind
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) taste
  14. 14.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.”
    (a) bored (b) happy (c) tired
  15. 15.What makes the sound “neigh”? (a) a horse (b) a cat (c) a motorbike
  16. 16.Which strong verb means “moved slowly and quietly”? (a) muttered (b) sobbed (c) crept
  17. 17.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gloomy cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) echoed (b) gloomy (c) cave
  18. 18.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Aarav ___ at the clock and hurried out.”
    (a) glanced (b) had (c) looked
  19. 19.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” ___ Farhan.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  20. 20.What makes the sound “click”? (a) a visitor at the door (b) a heavy bag falling (c) a camera
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) smell
  22. 22.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Stop that runaway goat! shouted Ananya. (b) “Stop that runaway goat”! shouted Ananya. (c) “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Ananya.
  23. 23.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shimmering peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) spread (b) peacock (c) shimmering
  24. 24.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Maria rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  25. 25.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Pooja’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “The snail felt slimy on my palm.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) sight
  27. 27.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “Dad threw the keys onto the table.”
    (a) gobbled (b) shouted (c) tossed
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “The medicine had a bitter taste.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) smell
  29. 29.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (b) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice. (c) The children played cricket after school.
  30. 30.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil was really hungry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  31. 31.Which strong verb could replace “put” in this sentence?
    “Nani put sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) tossed (b) sprinkled (c) hurled
  32. 32.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fluffy kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) curled (b) kitten (c) fluffy
  33. 33.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (b) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (c) I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  34. 34.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Let us keep the surprise a secret___” whispered Aryan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  35. 35.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) kind (c) sizzle
  36. 36.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil___” asked Nisha.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  37. 37.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The wind went ___ through the trees.”
    (a) achoo (b) hiss (c) whoosh
  38. 38.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is scared? (a) Sahil was scared. (b) Sahil counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (c) Sahil’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.
  39. 39.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dev ___ past his sleeping baby sister.”
    (a) tiptoed (b) had (c) walked
  40. 40.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Yash drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) happy (b) sad (c) bored

Answer key

  1. tired
  2. green
  3. sweet
  4. a comma (,)
  5. gigantic
  6. showing
  7. an exclamation mark (!)
  8. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  9. icy
  10. chubby
  11. hearing
  12. whoosh
  13. smell
  14. bored
  15. a horse
  16. crept
  17. gloomy
  18. glanced
  19. giggled
  20. a camera
  21. smell
  22. “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Ananya.
  23. shimmering
  24. showing
  25. showing
  26. touch
  27. tossed
  28. taste
  29. The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  30. telling
  31. sprinkled
  32. fluffy
  33. The bitter gourd tasted bitter.
  34. a comma (,)
  35. sizzle
  36. a question mark (?)
  37. whoosh
  38. Sahil’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.
  39. tiptoed
  40. bored

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