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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 249 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Who painted this lovely picture___” asked Nisha.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  2. 2.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (b) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (c) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  3. 3.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kabir’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) hungry (b) tired (c) happy
  4. 4.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fish market had a strong smell.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is scared? (a) A tear rolled slowly down Kavya’s cheek. (b) Kavya was scared. (c) Kavya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The snail felt slimy on my palm. (b) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (c) I heard waves crashing on the rocks.
  7. 7.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan stamped his foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  8. 8.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bitter gourd tasted bitter.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) touch
  9. 9.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill. (b) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (c) The fish market had a strong smell.
  10. 10.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Who painted this lovely picture?” ___ Sneha.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) I heard waves crashing on the rocks. (b) The warm sand tickled my toes. (c) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  12. 12.Which strong verb means “spoke very loudly”? (a) scribbled (b) hurled (c) shouted
  13. 13.What makes the sound “whoosh”? (a) a sparrow (b) the wind (c) a car horn
  14. 14.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “After the race, Kabir ___ a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) drank (b) came (c) gulped
  15. 15.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The girls ___ at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) giggled (b) laughed (c) made
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) sleepy (b) fine (c) okay
  17. 17.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The balloon burst with a pop.”
    (a) burst (b) pop (c) balloon
  18. 18.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “Dad threw the keys onto the table.”
    (a) tossed (b) raced (c) munched
  19. 19.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (b) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink. (c) The snail felt slimy on my palm.
  20. 20.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My best friend is moving away” sobbed Nisha. (b) My best friend is moving away, sobbed Nisha. (c) “My best friend is moving away,” sobbed Nisha.
  21. 21.Which strong verb means “took hold of quickly and roughly”? (a) grabbed (b) tumbled (c) gobbled
  22. 22.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a tortoise”
    (a) fast (b) slow (c) loud
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “The river water felt icy on my feet.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) taste
  24. 24.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) hearing
  25. 25.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The doorbell went ding-dong at noon.”
    (a) ding-dong (b) doorbell (c) noon
  26. 26.Which strong verb means “cried noisily”? (a) peered (b) sobbed (c) leapt
  27. 27.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The diver ___ into the deep pool.”
    (a) fell (b) plunged (c) got
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) smell
  29. 29.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) bored (b) happy (c) scared
  30. 30.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) thud (b) garden (c) tall
  31. 31.Which strong verb means “jumped high or far”? (a) sipped (b) tumbled (c) leapt
  32. 32.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is sad? (a) Aarav licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in. (b) Aarav was sad. (c) Aarav sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  33. 33.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Yash felt very scared.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  34. 34.Which strong verb could replace “burned” in this sentence?
    “The bonfire burned on Lohri night.”
    (a) shouted (b) giggled (c) blazed
  35. 35.Which strong verb could replace “shut” in this sentence?
    “Kabir shut the door when he was cross.”
    (a) slammed (b) giggled (c) wandered
  36. 36.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pigs ___ in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) oink (b) snip (c) quack
  37. 37.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The heavy bag fell to the floor with a ___.”
    (a) slurp (b) splash (c) thud
  38. 38.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The dog barked at the postman.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  39. 39.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The coach ___ to us from across the big field.”
    (a) shouted (b) came (c) spoke
  40. 40.Which strong verb means “threw lightly”? (a) shouted (b) tossed (c) muttered

Answer key

  1. a question mark (?)
  2. The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  3. hungry
  4. smell
  5. Kavya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  6. The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  7. showing
  8. taste
  9. The fish market had a strong smell.
  10. asked
  11. The warm sand tickled my toes.
  12. shouted
  13. the wind
  14. gulped
  15. giggled
  16. sleepy
  17. pop
  18. tossed
  19. Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.
  20. “My best friend is moving away,” sobbed Nisha.
  21. grabbed
  22. slow
  23. touch
  24. smell
  25. ding-dong
  26. sobbed
  27. plunged
  28. sight
  29. bored
  30. thud
  31. leapt
  32. Aarav sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  33. telling
  34. blazed
  35. slammed
  36. oink
  37. thud
  38. neither
  39. shouted
  40. tossed

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