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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 258 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “May I borrow your eraser?” asked Tara. (b) “May I borrow your eraser”? asked Tara. (c) “May I borrow your eraser” asked Tara.
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) touch
  3. 3.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Neel’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.”
    (a) cold (b) happy (c) hungry
  4. 4.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tara gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) tired (b) sad (c) hungry
  5. 5.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Do not tell anyone about the party,” ___ Dev.
    (a) whispered (b) shouted (c) asked
  6. 6.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The little lamb gave a soft baa.”
    (a) lamb (b) soft (c) baa
  7. 7.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) knock (c) garden
  8. 8.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tara folded her arms and glared at her brother.”
    (a) sad (b) angry (c) tired
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Arjun’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  10. 10.Which strong verb means “chewed with a crunching noise”? (a) crawled (b) slammed (c) munched
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (b) The wet soap slipped from my hands. (c) The bees buzzed around the hive.
  12. 12.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The scissors went ___ as Mum cut the thread.”
    (a) crackle (b) snip (c) moo
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) fine (b) okay (c) juicy
  14. 14.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is tired? (a) Neel licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in. (b) Neel could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (c) Neel was tired.
  15. 15.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The striped snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) slid (b) striped (c) snake
  16. 16.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The creaky stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) creaky (b) groaned (c) stairs
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) taste
  18. 18.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tara dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.”
    (a) happy (b) hungry (c) tired
  19. 19.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The feathery grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) grass (b) tickled (c) feathery
  20. 20.What makes the sound “vroom”? (a) a motorbike (b) a duck (c) a lion
  21. 21.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Arjun threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!””
    (a) showing (b) telling
  22. 22.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) good (b) okay (c) chubby
  23. 23.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pakoras sizzle in the hot oil.”
    (a) oil (b) pakoras (c) sizzle
  24. 24.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose”, giggled Priya. (b) Ha ha, you have milk on your nose, giggled Priya. (c) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Priya.
  25. 25.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is happy? (a) Aarav threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (b) Aarav laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (c) Aarav was happy.
  26. 26.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The kitten’s fur felt like silk. (b) The sun was a golden ball of fire. (c) The train left the station at nine.
  27. 27.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My father bought a new umbrella. (b) The pillow was as soft as a cloud. (c) The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  28. 28.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The lake was a mirror for the mountains.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  29. 29.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Vihaan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  30. 30.What makes the sound “pitter-patter”? (a) raindrops (b) a cat (c) pakoras in hot oil
  31. 31.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cuddly teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) sat (b) bear (c) cuddly
  32. 32.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose” giggled Tara. (b) Hee hee, that clown has a red nose, giggled Tara. (c) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Tara.
  33. 33.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night. (b) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (c) The glue felt sticky between my fingers.
  34. 34.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The ducks quack noisily near the pond.”
    (a) quack (b) pond (c) ducks
  35. 35.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row. (b) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty. (c) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.
  36. 36.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ wind howled all night.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) icy
  37. 37.Which sense does this line use?
    “The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) smell
  38. 38.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan was really tired.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  39. 39.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The sea tasted very salty. (b) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (c) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  40. 40.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gloomy cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) echoed (b) cave (c) gloomy

Answer key

  1. “May I borrow your eraser?” asked Tara.
  2. smell
  3. cold
  4. hungry
  5. whispered
  6. baa
  7. knock
  8. angry
  9. showing
  10. munched
  11. The bees buzzed around the hive.
  12. snip
  13. juicy
  14. Neel could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.
  15. striped
  16. creaky
  17. taste
  18. tired
  19. feathery
  20. a motorbike
  21. showing
  22. chubby
  23. sizzle
  24. “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Priya.
  25. Aarav laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  26. The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  27. The pillow was as soft as a cloud.
  28. metaphor
  29. showing
  30. raindrops
  31. cuddly
  32. “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Tara.
  33. Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  34. quack
  35. The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.
  36. icy
  37. taste
  38. telling
  39. I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  40. gloomy

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