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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 262 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a peacock”
    (a) humble (b) proud (c) shy
  2. 2.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is sad? (a) Priya’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter. (b) Priya was sad. (c) Tears filled Priya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.
  3. 3.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) We watched the peacock open its blue tail. (b) The warm sand tickled my toes. (c) The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  4. 4.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The enormous elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) enormous (b) stomped (c) elephant
  5. 5.Which strong verb could replace “put” in this sentence?
    “Nani put sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) sprinkled (b) wandered (c) trudged
  6. 6.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tears filled Kabir’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  7. 7.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) sight
  8. 8.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The grumpy giant snored under the tree.”
    (a) snored (b) giant (c) grumpy
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is happy? (a) Riya hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Riya was happy. (c) Riya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.
  10. 10.What makes the sound “slurp”? (a) a noisy drinker (b) a dog (c) a sheep
  11. 11.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The bus stopped at the school gate. (b) The road was as straight as a ruler. (c) The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Simran is hungry? (a) Simran was hungry. (b) Simran rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers. (c) Simran kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  13. 13.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pencil (b) sizzle (c) kind
  14. 14.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleek car zoomed past us.”
    (a) zoomed (b) car (c) sleek
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) hearing
  16. 16.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Fatima shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  17. 17.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) neigh (b) river (c) happy
  18. 18.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  19. 19.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Her smile was as bright as the sun. (b) The library is a treasure chest of stories. (c) The dog barked at the postman.
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is cold? (a) Sahil’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap. (b) Sahil was cold. (c) Sahil gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  21. 21.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (b) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (c) The snow was a white blanket on the hills.
  22. 22.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (b) My little brother is a chatterbox. (c) The road was as straight as a ruler.
  23. 23.Which word fits the gap best?
    “How many stars are in the sky?” ___ Saanvi.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  24. 24.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) scribbled (b) blazed (c) dashed
  25. 25.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.”
    (a) hungry (b) cold (c) scared
  26. 26.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “Riya ate a crunchy apple on the bus.”
    (a) peered (b) tossed (c) munched
  27. 27.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is angry? (a) Saanvi was angry. (b) Saanvi’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap. (c) Saanvi’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  28. 28.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” ___ Ishaan.
    (a) asked (b) whispered (c) shouted
  29. 29.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The fireworks burst like giant flowers.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  30. 30.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a slurp.”
    (a) slurp (b) lassi (c) drank
  31. 31.Which strong verb could replace “took” in this sentence?
    “The monkey took the banana from my hand.”
    (a) sipped (b) nibbled (c) grabbed
  32. 32.Which sense does this line use?
    “We heard the train whistle far away.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) hearing
  33. 33.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The thunder went boom over the hills.”
    (a) hills (b) boom (c) thunder
  34. 34.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The children chattered like a flock of parrots. (b) The snow was a white blanket on the hills. (c) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day.
  35. 35.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Joseph was tired.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  36. 36.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Nisha. (b) “I have lost my favourite teddy”, sobbed Nisha. (c) “I have lost my favourite teddy” sobbed Nisha.
  37. 37.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The tired runner ___ over the finish line.”
    (a) staggered (b) walked (c) got
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.”
    (a) tired (b) sad (c) hungry
  39. 39.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The children jumped into the pool with a splash.”
    (a) splash (b) children (c) pool
  40. 40.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) good (b) juicy (c) nice

Answer key

  1. proud
  2. Tears filled Priya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.
  3. We watched the peacock open its blue tail.
  4. enormous
  5. sprinkled
  6. showing
  7. sight
  8. grumpy
  9. Riya hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  10. a noisy drinker
  11. The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  12. Simran kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  13. sizzle
  14. sleek
  15. hearing
  16. showing
  17. neigh
  18. metaphor
  19. The library is a treasure chest of stories.
  20. Sahil’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  21. The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  22. My little brother is a chatterbox.
  23. asked
  24. dashed
  25. scared
  26. munched
  27. Saanvi’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  28. whispered
  29. simile
  30. slurp
  31. grabbed
  32. hearing
  33. boom
  34. The snow was a white blanket on the hills.
  35. telling
  36. “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Nisha.
  37. staggered
  38. tired
  39. splash
  40. juicy

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