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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 266 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) okay (b) sleepy (c) nice
  2. 2.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) lazy (b) busy (c) silent
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) sight
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (b) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  5. 5.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The ducks ___ noisily near the pond.”
    (a) beep (b) quack (c) crunch
  6. 6.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an owl”
    (a) wise (b) foolish (c) silly
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is hungry? (a) Farhan shivered and stamped his feet in the snow. (b) Farhan was hungry. (c) Farhan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  8. 8.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) tired (b) scared (c) hungry
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sneha is bored? (a) Sneha’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home. (b) Sneha was bored. (c) Sneha drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.
  10. 10.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The children played cricket after school. (b) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (c) The snow was a white blanket on the hills.
  11. 11.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whiff of incense floated from the temple.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) smell
  12. 12.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) nice (b) fluffy (c) fine
  13. 13.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the baby is sleeping___” whispered Tenzin.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  14. 14.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) hot (b) cold (c) loud
  15. 15.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The train left the station at nine. (b) The playground was an oven in May. (c) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) touch
  17. 17.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The striped snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) slid (b) snake (c) striped
  18. 18.Which sense does this line use?
    “The glue felt sticky between my fingers.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) hearing
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  20. 20.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) I heard waves crashing on the rocks. (b) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (c) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.
  21. 21.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Diya ___ her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) clutched (b) went (c) held
  22. 22.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) sipped (b) went (c) drank
  23. 23.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (b) My little brother is a chatterbox. (c) The dog barked at the postman.
  24. 24.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The diver fell into the deep pool.”
    (a) wandered (b) plunged (c) glanced
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) gloomy (b) okay (c) nice
  26. 26.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ladder wobbled under Dad’s feet.”
    (a) good (b) rickety (c) fine
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) cheeky
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “The temple bells rang out loudly.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) hearing
  29. 29.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (b) Her bedroom is a pigsty. (c) The runner was as quick as lightning.
  30. 30.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is sad? (a) Maria was sad. (b) Tears filled Maria’s eyes, and she stared at the floor. (c) Maria stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  31. 31.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The thunder crashed and roared. (b) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (c) The medicine had a bitter taste.
  32. 32.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is angry? (a) Aarav threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (b) Aarav was angry. (c) Aarav sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  33. 33.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The foaming river rushed over the rocks.”
    (a) foaming (b) river (c) rushed
  34. 34.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) giggled (b) chubby (c) baby
  35. 35.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) gentle (c) tick-tock
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  37. 37.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) angry (b) hungry (c) bored
  38. 38.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The baby ___ across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) came (b) moved (c) crawled
  39. 39.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Kabir finished his homework early. (b) The traffic jam was a long metal snake. (c) The wrestler was as strong as an ox.
  40. 40.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) fine (b) okay (c) creaky

Answer key

  1. sleepy
  2. busy
  3. smell
  4. The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  5. quack
  6. wise
  7. Farhan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  8. hungry
  9. Sneha drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.
  10. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  11. smell
  12. fluffy
  13. a comma (,)
  14. cold
  15. The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  16. touch
  17. striped
  18. touch
  19. showing
  20. The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.
  21. clutched
  22. sipped
  23. The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  24. plunged
  25. gloomy
  26. rickety
  27. cheeky
  28. hearing
  29. The runner was as quick as lightning.
  30. Tears filled Maria’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.
  31. The thunder crashed and roared.
  32. Aarav threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!”
  33. foaming
  34. chubby
  35. tick-tock
  36. metaphor
  37. hungry
  38. crawled
  39. The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  40. creaky

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