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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 276 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an ox”
    (a) strong (b) weak (c) tiny
  2. 2.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The diver ___ into the deep pool.”
    (a) went (b) plunged (c) fell
  3. 3.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The wet soap slipped from my hands. (b) The earth smelled lovely after the first rain. (c) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  4. 4.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “The bowler threw the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) whispered (b) hurled (c) tumbled
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aryan is cold? (a) Aryan was cold. (b) Aryan stamped his foot and slammed the door. (c) Aryan’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  6. 6.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The feather was as light as air.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  7. 7.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises. (b) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (c) I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  8. 8.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is hungry? (a) Priya gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (b) Priya was hungry. (c) Priya laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  9. 9.Which sentence is a simile? (a) His heart was a drum during the race. (b) Kabir finished his homework early. (c) Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) steaming
  11. 11.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Look out, the shelf is falling!” ___ Imran.
    (a) whispered (b) giggled (c) shouted
  12. 12.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) okay (b) fine (c) dazzling
  13. 13.Which strong verb means “walked quietly on your toes”? (a) tiptoed (b) shouted (c) gulped
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) taste
  15. 15.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) achoo (c) chair
  16. 16.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The warm sand tickled my toes. (b) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (c) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.
  17. 17.Which strong verb could replace “jumped” in this sentence?
    “The deer jumped over the fallen log.”
    (a) leapt (b) munched (c) nibbled
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is cold? (a) Imran hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Imran shivered and stamped his feet in the snow. (c) Imran was cold.
  19. 19.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (b) My little sister is as busy as a bee. (c) The cat sat on the warm mat.
  20. 20.Which strong verb means “took a very quick look”? (a) glanced (b) sobbed (c) hurled
  21. 21.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My sandcastle got washed away,” ___ Priya.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  22. 22.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pigs ___ in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) pop (b) hiss (c) oink
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “I felt the cool breeze on my face.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) hearing
  24. 24.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Fatima. (b) “Shh, the film is starting”, whispered Fatima. (c) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Fatima.
  25. 25.What makes the sound “moo”? (a) a duck (b) a heavy bag falling (c) a cow
  26. 26.What makes the sound “honk”? (a) a car horn (b) a cow (c) the wind
  27. 27.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) smell
  29. 29.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is angry? (a) Arjun was angry. (b) Arjun’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists. (c) Arjun gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  30. 30.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) My little sister is as busy as a bee. (b) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (c) His heart was a drum during the race.
  31. 31.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The tired dog snored like a tractor. (b) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (c) The bus stopped at the school gate.
  32. 32.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Tara ___ into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) peered (b) did (c) looked
  33. 33.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Kabir finished his homework early. (b) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (c) The playground was an oven in May.
  34. 34.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) happy (c) oink
  35. 35.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ river rushed over the rocks.”
    (a) fine (b) foaming (c) okay
  36. 36.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is angry? (a) Joseph was angry. (b) Joseph drummed his fingers and stared at the clock. (c) Joseph folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  37. 37.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) kind (c) drip
  38. 38.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Our cat lets out a sad ___ at night.”
    (a) whoosh (b) thud (c) meow
  39. 39.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The oranges fell out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) shouted (b) tumbled (c) munched
  40. 40.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The thunder crashed and roared. (b) I felt the cool breeze on my face. (c) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.

Answer key

  1. strong
  2. plunged
  3. The wet soap slipped from my hands.
  4. hurled
  5. Aryan’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  6. simile
  7. Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.
  8. Priya gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  9. Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.
  10. steaming
  11. shouted
  12. dazzling
  13. tiptoed
  14. touch
  15. achoo
  16. I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  17. leapt
  18. Imran shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.
  19. My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  20. glanced
  21. sobbed
  22. oink
  23. touch
  24. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Fatima.
  25. a cow
  26. a car horn
  27. showing
  28. smell
  29. Arjun’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.
  30. His heart was a drum during the race.
  31. The tired dog snored like a tractor.
  32. peered
  33. The playground was an oven in May.
  34. oink
  35. foaming
  36. Joseph folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  37. drip
  38. meow
  39. tumbled
  40. Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.

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