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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 280 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (b) The moon was a silver plate in the sky. (c) The teacher wrote the date on the board.
  2. 2.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The raindrops went ___ on the roof.”
    (a) neigh (b) hoot (c) pitter-patter
  3. 3.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The fog was a grey curtain over the town. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) The baby slept like a log.
  4. 4.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The mysterious parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) parcel (b) mysterious (c) arrived
  5. 5.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Ishaan ___ a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) came (b) scribbled (c) wrote
  6. 6.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My father bought a new umbrella.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  7. 7.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) busy (b) lazy (c) silent
  8. 8.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The new shoes shone like stars.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  9. 9.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) kind (b) pop (c) yellow
  10. 10.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) I felt the cool breeze on my face. (b) The medicine had a bitter taste. (c) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  11. 11.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley. (b) The baby slept in the afternoon. (c) The pillow was as soft as a cloud.
  12. 12.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The road was as straight as a ruler. (b) Her bedroom is a pigsty. (c) It rained all night in our town.
  13. 13.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The night was as dark as ink.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) hearing
  16. 16.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an owl”
    (a) silly (b) wise (c) foolish
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) taste
  18. 18.Which word fits the gap best?
    “May I borrow your eraser?” ___ Riya.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  19. 19.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The raindrops went pitter-patter on the roof.”
    (a) roof (b) raindrops (c) pitter-patter
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) taste
  21. 21.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) tall (c) beep
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) touch
  23. 23.Which strong verb could replace “put” in this sentence?
    “Nani put sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) tiptoed (b) hurled (c) sprinkled
  24. 24.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The microwave gave a beep when the milk was hot.”
    (a) microwave (b) beep (c) milk
  25. 25.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) woof (b) pencil (c) mango
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) smell
  27. 27.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) came (b) cleaned (c) scrubbed
  28. 28.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ bread crumbled in my fingers.”
    (a) stale (b) good (c) nice
  29. 29.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as glass”
    (a) clear (b) soft (c) muddy
  30. 30.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) creaky
  31. 31.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Priya felt very cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  32. 32.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The monkey ___ the banana from my hand.”
    (a) grabbed (b) made (c) took
  33. 33.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The leaking tap went drip in the dark.”
    (a) tap (b) dark (c) drip
  34. 34.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a peacock”
    (a) shy (b) proud (c) humble
  35. 35.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The mouse ___ the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) ate (b) went (c) nibbled
  36. 36.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Imran drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) happy (b) bored (c) hungry
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  38. 38.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The balloon burst with a pop.”
    (a) pop (b) balloon (c) burst
  39. 39.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chair (b) ding-dong (c) gentle
  40. 40.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The narrow road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) twisted (b) narrow (c) road

Answer key

  1. The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  2. pitter-patter
  3. The fog was a grey curtain over the town.
  4. mysterious
  5. scribbled
  6. neither
  7. busy
  8. simile
  9. pop
  10. I felt the cool breeze on my face.
  11. The pillow was as soft as a cloud.
  12. The road was as straight as a ruler.
  13. simile
  14. sight
  15. touch
  16. wise
  17. smell
  18. asked
  19. pitter-patter
  20. taste
  21. beep
  22. smell
  23. sprinkled
  24. beep
  25. woof
  26. smell
  27. scrubbed
  28. stale
  29. clear
  30. creaky
  31. telling
  32. grabbed
  33. drip
  34. proud
  35. nibbled
  36. bored
  37. showing
  38. pop
  39. ding-dong
  40. narrow

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