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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 304 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) garden (b) hiss (c) kind
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) touch
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “I felt the cool breeze on my face.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) hearing
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) We watched the peacock open its blue tail. (b) I tasted the soup and added more salt. (c) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  5. 5.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bees buzzed around the hive.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) sight
  6. 6.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Imran rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.”
    (a) tired (b) cold (c) hungry
  7. 7.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Diya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) cold (b) hungry (c) bored
  8. 8.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) snip (b) pencil (c) gentle
  9. 9.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The heavy bag fell to the floor with a ___.”
    (a) thud (b) pitter-patter (c) baa
  10. 10.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat___” giggled Joseph.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  11. 11.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shimmering peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) peacock (b) spread (c) shimmering
  12. 12.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The train left the station at nine. (b) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (c) The busy market was a beehive.
  13. 13.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a tortoise”
    (a) fast (b) slow (c) loud
  14. 14.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) river (b) moo (c) chair
  15. 15.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Dev is tired? (a) Dev was tired. (b) Dev shivered and stamped his feet in the snow. (c) Dev rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  16. 16.Which word fits the gap best?
    “What time does the train leave?” ___ Dev.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is hungry? (a) Priya licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in. (b) Priya was hungry. (c) Priya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is tired? (a) Tenzin dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (b) Tenzin was tired. (c) Tenzin threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!”
  19. 19.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The busy market was a beehive. (b) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (c) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  20. 20.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) nice (b) crispy (c) okay
  21. 21.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The dog barked at the postman. (b) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill. (c) The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  22. 22.Which strong verb means “wrote quickly and untidily”? (a) sprinkled (b) scribbled (c) tumbled
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) nice (b) sticky (c) fine
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kite danced in the sky.”
    (a) colourful (b) okay (c) fine
  25. 25.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The cat sat on the warm mat.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  26. 26.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The lake sparkled under the full moon. (b) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (c) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.
  27. 27.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The frogs croak all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) croak (b) frogs (c) monsoon
  28. 28.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  29. 29.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The horse gave a ___ in the stable.”
    (a) thud (b) slurp (c) neigh
  30. 30.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Is it time for lunch yet?” ___ Rohan.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Zoya rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa.”
    (a) tired (b) angry (c) scared
  32. 32.Which sense does this line use?
    “The golden sand glittered in the sun.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch
  33. 33.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The mouse ate the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) hurled (b) nibbled (c) staggered
  34. 34.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dad ___ the keys onto the table.”
    (a) threw (b) tossed (c) went
  35. 35.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The icy wind howled all night.”
    (a) howled (b) icy (c) wind
  36. 36.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) hot (b) loud (c) cold
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) fine (b) good (c) feathery
  38. 38.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Your silly face makes me laugh,” ___ Diya.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  39. 39.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil?” ___ Yash.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is sad? (a) Kavya stamped her foot and slammed the door. (b) A tear rolled slowly down Kavya’s cheek. (c) Kavya was sad.

Answer key

  1. hiss
  2. touch
  3. touch
  4. I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  5. hearing
  6. tired
  7. hungry
  8. snip
  9. thud
  10. a comma (,)
  11. shimmering
  12. The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  13. slow
  14. moo
  15. Dev rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.
  16. asked
  17. Priya licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  18. Tenzin dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  19. The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  20. crispy
  21. The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  22. scribbled
  23. sticky
  24. colourful
  25. neither
  26. The lake sparkled under the full moon.
  27. croak
  28. showing
  29. neigh
  30. asked
  31. tired
  32. sight
  33. nibbled
  34. tossed
  35. icy
  36. cold
  37. feathery
  38. giggled
  39. asked
  40. A tear rolled slowly down Kavya’s cheek.

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