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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 311 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The eagle ___ above the hills.”
    (a) got (b) soared (c) flew
  2. 2.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a ___.”
    (a) quack (b) slurp (c) snip
  3. 3.Which strong verb means “drank in tiny mouthfuls”? (a) strolled (b) peered (c) sipped
  4. 4.What makes the sound “achoo”? (a) a jump into a pool (b) a sneeze (c) raindrops
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel was happy.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  6. 6.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aryan folded his arms and glared at his brother.”
    (a) angry (b) hungry (c) scared
  7. 7.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Simran. (b) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock” giggled Simran. (c) Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock, giggled Simran.
  8. 8.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Come back here, Moti!” shouted Sahil. (b) Come back here, Moti! shouted Sahil. (c) “Come back here, Moti”! shouted Sahil.
  9. 9.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “After the race, Kabir ___ a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) drank (b) gulped (c) came
  10. 10.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The juicy mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) filled (b) mangoes (c) juicy
  11. 11.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.”
    (a) angry (b) cold (c) sad
  12. 12.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slowly (b) yellow (c) boom
  13. 13.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The motorbike went ___ down the road.”
    (a) vroom (b) woof (c) cock-a-doodle-doo
  14. 14.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The tired dog snored like a tractor.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  15. 15.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil was hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  16. 16.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The puppy gave a happy ___ at the gate.”
    (a) woof (b) baa (c) sizzle
  17. 17.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The thunder crashed and roared. (b) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen. (c) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.
  18. 18.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  19. 19.Which word fits the gap best?
    “How many stars are in the sky?” ___ Sneha.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  20. 20.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Run, the bus is leaving___” shouted Manav.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  21. 21.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The monkey ___ the banana from my hand.”
    (a) went (b) took (c) grabbed
  22. 22.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Diya is happy? (a) Diya was happy. (b) Diya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (c) Diya beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  23. 23.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “We ___ home through the deep mud.”
    (a) trudged (b) did (c) walked
  24. 24.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The cat sat on the warm mat. (b) The road was as straight as a ruler. (c) The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  25. 25.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Simran’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  26. 26.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The medicine had a bitter taste. (b) The fish market had a strong smell. (c) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  27. 27.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Meera is angry? (a) Meera was angry. (b) Meera’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists. (c) Meera licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  28. 28.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  29. 29.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) muttered (b) dashed (c) giggled
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sour lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) lemon (b) pull (c) sour
  31. 31.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dad ___ the keys onto the table.”
    (a) threw (b) went (c) tossed
  32. 32.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil___” asked Joseph.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  33. 33.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an owl”
    (a) foolish (b) wise (c) silly
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fish market had a strong smell.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  35. 35.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (b) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich. (c) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  36. 36.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) narrow
  37. 37.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My best friend is moving away”, sobbed Ananya. (b) “My best friend is moving away,” sobbed Ananya. (c) “My best friend is moving away” sobbed Ananya.
  38. 38.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The diver fell into the deep pool.”
    (a) clutched (b) sipped (c) plunged
  39. 39.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) sank (b) squishy (c) cushion
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Nisha is hungry? (a) Nisha gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (b) Nisha rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers. (c) Nisha was hungry.

Answer key

  1. soared
  2. slurp
  3. sipped
  4. a sneeze
  5. telling
  6. angry
  7. “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Simran.
  8. “Come back here, Moti!” shouted Sahil.
  9. gulped
  10. juicy
  11. cold
  12. boom
  13. vroom
  14. simile
  15. telling
  16. woof
  17. The thunder crashed and roared.
  18. The old door creaked as it opened.
  19. asked
  20. an exclamation mark (!)
  21. grabbed
  22. Diya beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  23. trudged
  24. The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  25. showing
  26. The fish market had a strong smell.
  27. Meera’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  28. metaphor
  29. dashed
  30. sour
  31. tossed
  32. a question mark (?)
  33. wise
  34. smell
  35. Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  36. narrow
  37. “My best friend is moving away,” sobbed Ananya.
  38. plunged
  39. squishy
  40. Nisha gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.

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