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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 322 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The lost calf walked through the fields.”
    (a) peered (b) wandered (c) hurled
  2. 2.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Aryan’s cheek.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  3. 3.Which strong verb could replace “shut” in this sentence?
    “Kabir shut the door when he was cross.”
    (a) slammed (b) tumbled (c) munched
  4. 4.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The children jumped into the pool with a ___.”
    (a) cock-a-doodle-doo (b) splash (c) honk
  5. 5.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The booming thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) thunder (b) shook (c) booming
  6. 6.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The two friends ___ to the gate to see who was fastest.”
    (a) ran (b) raced (c) had
  7. 7.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Who painted this lovely picture?” ___ Dev.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  8. 8.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (b) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (c) The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is cold? (a) Saanvi sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Saanvi was cold. (c) Saanvi rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.
  10. 10.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  11. 11.What makes the sound “splash”? (a) an owl (b) a jump into a pool (c) a campfire
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is bored? (a) Kavya counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (b) Kavya’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again. (c) Kavya was bored.
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) fine (b) tiny (c) good
  14. 14.Which strong verb means “drank in tiny mouthfuls”? (a) fluttered (b) tossed (c) sipped
  15. 15.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slurp (b) gentle (c) kind
  16. 16.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My kite is torn to pieces” sobbed Rohan. (b) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Rohan. (c) My kite is torn to pieces, sobbed Rohan.
  17. 17.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) cock-a-doodle-doo (b) teacher (c) happy
  18. 18.What makes the sound “oink”? (a) a crisp papad (b) a pig (c) a sparrow
  19. 19.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Kabir finished his homework early. (b) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (c) The runner was as quick as lightning.
  20. 20.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The cat ___ quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) went (b) crept (c) got
  21. 21.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kabir’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  22. 22.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Tara’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.”
    (a) scared (b) cold (c) sad
  23. 23.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as snow”
    (a) black (b) noisy (c) white
  24. 24.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Diya ___ her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) made (b) held (c) clutched
  25. 25.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The baby slept in the afternoon. (b) The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds. (c) The playground was an oven in May.
  26. 26.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock___” giggled Priya.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  28. 28.What makes the sound “boom”? (a) a car horn (b) pakoras in hot oil (c) thunder
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cheeky monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) stole (b) monkey (c) cheeky
  30. 30.What makes the sound “pitter-patter”? (a) a cow (b) a visitor at the door (c) raindrops
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Riya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.”
    (a) scared (b) hungry (c) happy
  32. 32.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) drank (b) came (c) sipped
  33. 33.Which strong verb means “moved on hands and knees”? (a) sprinkled (b) muttered (c) crawled
  34. 34.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) crunch (c) kind
  35. 35.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) happy (b) sad (c) tired
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The teacher wrote the date on the board.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  37. 37.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) meow (b) gentle (c) happy
  38. 38.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My little sister is as busy as a bee.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  39. 39.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy___” sobbed Pooja.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  40. 40.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) sight

Answer key

  1. wandered
  2. showing
  3. slammed
  4. splash
  5. booming
  6. raced
  7. asked
  8. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  9. Saanvi rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.
  10. metaphor
  11. a jump into a pool
  12. Kavya counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  13. tiny
  14. sipped
  15. slurp
  16. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Rohan.
  17. cock-a-doodle-doo
  18. a pig
  19. The stars were diamonds in the night sky.
  20. crept
  21. showing
  22. sad
  23. white
  24. clutched
  25. The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds.
  26. a comma (,)
  27. sight
  28. thunder
  29. cheeky
  30. raindrops
  31. scared
  32. sipped
  33. crawled
  34. crunch
  35. happy
  36. neither
  37. meow
  38. simile
  39. a comma (,)
  40. sight

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