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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 334 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) scared (b) bored (c) sad
  2. 2.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The creaky stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) groaned (b) stairs (c) creaky
  3. 3.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “We ___ home through the deep mud.”
    (a) walked (b) did (c) trudged
  4. 4.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The enormous elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) enormous (b) stomped (c) elephant
  5. 5.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy___” sobbed Pooja.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  6. 6.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rusty bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) rusty (b) rattled (c) bus
  7. 7.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) good (b) okay (c) creaky
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The bees buzzed around the hive. (b) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill. (c) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  9. 9.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The diver fell into the deep pool.”
    (a) sobbed (b) plunged (c) strolled
  10. 10.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The mouse ate the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) stared (b) nibbled (c) wandered
  11. 11.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aisha is sad? (a) Aisha’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (b) Tears filled Aisha’s eyes, and she stared at the floor. (c) Aisha was sad.
  12. 12.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Hee hee, stop tickling me___” giggled Vihaan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  13. 13.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The camera went ___ at the party.”
    (a) chirp (b) knock (c) click
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  15. 15.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The bus stopped at the school gate. (b) The feather was as light as air. (c) The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) cuddly (b) fine (c) okay
  17. 17.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) giggled (b) chubby (c) baby
  18. 18.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Watch out for that car!” ___ Simran.
    (a) whispered (b) giggled (c) shouted
  19. 19.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (b) The river water felt icy on my feet. (c) The sea tasted very salty.
  20. 20.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet___” giggled Sneha.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  21. 21.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an owl”
    (a) wise (b) foolish (c) silly
  22. 22.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (b) The lake sparkled under the full moon. (c) The thunder crashed and roared.
  23. 23.Which strong verb could replace “put” in this sentence?
    “Nani put sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) sprinkled (b) shouted (c) plunged
  24. 24.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The patchwork quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) quilt (b) covered (c) patchwork
  25. 25.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Manav was sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sea tasted very salty.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) hearing
  27. 27.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  28. 28.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) good (b) chubby (c) nice
  29. 29.What makes the sound “honk”? (a) a clock (b) a car horn (c) a campfire
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleek car zoomed past us.”
    (a) zoomed (b) car (c) sleek
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) sight
  32. 32.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The snow was a white blanket on the hills.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  33. 33.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “Grandma drank her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) sipped (b) muttered (c) glanced
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) sad (b) angry (c) scared
  35. 35.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) nice (b) golden (c) good
  36. 36.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is happy? (a) Yash dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (b) Yash beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Yash was happy.
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ tree towered over the house.”
    (a) gigantic (b) nice (c) good
  38. 38.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The eagle ___ above the hills.”
    (a) did (b) flew (c) soared
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is hungry? (a) Joseph was hungry. (b) Joseph could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (c) Joseph gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  40. 40.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “Meera ran to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) whispered (b) dashed (c) plunged

Answer key

  1. scared
  2. creaky
  3. trudged
  4. enormous
  5. a comma (,)
  6. rusty
  7. creaky
  8. The bees buzzed around the hive.
  9. plunged
  10. nibbled
  11. Tears filled Aisha’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.
  12. a comma (,)
  13. click
  14. smell
  15. The feather was as light as air.
  16. cuddly
  17. chubby
  18. shouted
  19. The river water felt icy on my feet.
  20. a comma (,)
  21. wise
  22. The thunder crashed and roared.
  23. sprinkled
  24. patchwork
  25. telling
  26. taste
  27. simile
  28. chubby
  29. a car horn
  30. sleek
  31. sight
  32. metaphor
  33. sipped
  34. scared
  35. golden
  36. Yash beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  37. gigantic
  38. soared
  39. Joseph gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  40. dashed

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