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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 340 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Aryan’s cheek.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  2. 2.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) rough (b) fine (c) good
  3. 3.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The blooming garden smelled of roses.”
    (a) garden (b) smelled (c) blooming
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sneha’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  5. 5.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose___” giggled Aisha.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  7. 7.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The colourful kite danced in the sky.”
    (a) colourful (b) kite (c) danced
  8. 8.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “After the race, Kabir drank a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) soared (b) gulped (c) fluttered
  9. 9.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  10. 10.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The tired runner ___ over the finish line.”
    (a) walked (b) staggered (c) came
  11. 11.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The balloon burst with a ___.”
    (a) croak (b) beep (c) pop
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “The old door creaked as it opened.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) sight
  13. 13.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a feather”
    (a) dark (b) heavy (c) light
  14. 14.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) pitter-patter (c) quickly
  15. 15.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The camera went click at the party.”
    (a) camera (b) click (c) party
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  17. 17.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tall (b) pencil (c) beep
  18. 18.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (b) The cat sat on the warm mat. (c) The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  19. 19.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “The eagle flew above the hills.”
    (a) scribbled (b) sipped (c) soared
  20. 20.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kabir could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) tired (b) happy (c) angry
  21. 21.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap”, whispered Maria. (b) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Maria. (c) Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap, whispered Maria.
  22. 22.Which strong verb means “burned brightly and fiercely”? (a) dashed (b) wandered (c) blazed
  23. 23.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is hungry? (a) Ishaan was hungry. (b) Ishaan beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Ishaan licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  24. 24.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aisha’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  25. 25.What makes the sound “hoot”? (a) a steel plate falling (b) raindrops (c) an owl
  26. 26.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Fatima sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  27. 27.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The fish market had a strong smell. (b) The bees buzzed around the hive. (c) I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  28. 28.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake___” whispered Saanvi.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  29. 29.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slowly (b) happy (c) click
  30. 30.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap” whispered Imran. (b) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Imran. (c) Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap, whispered Imran.
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) hearing
  32. 32.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The oranges ___ out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) fell (b) had (c) tumbled
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “We heard the train whistle far away.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) touch
  34. 34.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a mouse”
    (a) huge (b) quiet (c) loud
  35. 35.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” ___ Ananya.
    (a) shouted (b) asked (c) whispered
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  37. 37.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gigantic tree towered over the house.”
    (a) gigantic (b) towered (c) tree
  38. 38.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Maria felt very tired.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  39. 39.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The children played cricket after school.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  40. 40.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Farhan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) telling (b) showing

Answer key

  1. showing
  2. rough
  3. blooming
  4. showing
  5. a comma (,)
  6. The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  7. colourful
  8. gulped
  9. touch
  10. staggered
  11. pop
  12. hearing
  13. light
  14. pitter-patter
  15. click
  16. taste
  17. beep
  18. The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  19. soared
  20. tired
  21. “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Maria.
  22. blazed
  23. Ishaan licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  24. showing
  25. an owl
  26. showing
  27. The fish market had a strong smell.
  28. a comma (,)
  29. click
  30. “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Imran.
  31. smell
  32. tumbled
  33. hearing
  34. quiet
  35. whispered
  36. hearing
  37. gigantic
  38. telling
  39. neither
  40. showing

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