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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 362 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “The temple bells rang out loudly.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) hearing
  2. 2.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The speckled owl hooted from the branch.”
    (a) hooted (b) owl (c) speckled
  3. 3.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tenzin counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.”
    (a) bored (b) angry (c) scared
  4. 4.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap, whispered Simran. (b) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap” whispered Simran. (c) “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Simran.
  5. 5.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) muddy (b) fine (c) good
  6. 6.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (b) The wrestler was as strong as an ox. (c) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.
  7. 7.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The new shoes shone like stars. (b) His heart was a drum during the race. (c) The baby slept in the afternoon.
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Farhan rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  9. 9.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The moon was a silver plate in the sky. (b) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (c) The wrestler was as strong as an ox.
  10. 10.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sahil sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.”
    (a) sad (b) happy (c) bored
  11. 11.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Saanvi’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.”
    (a) tired (b) cold (c) sad
  12. 12.What makes the sound “croak”? (a) a frog (b) a balloon (c) a microwave
  13. 13.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The lake was a mirror for the mountains. (b) The water was as clear as glass. (c) The train left the station at nine.
  14. 14.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pop (b) tall (c) green
  15. 15.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Dad’s voice boomed like thunder.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  16. 16.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Why is the sky blue?” asked Riya. (b) “Why is the sky blue”? asked Riya. (c) Why is the sky blue? asked Riya.
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch
  18. 18.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, we are in the library,” ___ Priya.
    (a) shouted (b) asked (c) whispered
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Riya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “The medicine had a bitter taste.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) taste
  21. 21.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room. (b) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (c) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.
  22. 22.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) okay (b) fine (c) golden
  23. 23.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Is it time for lunch yet___” asked Ishaan.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  24. 24.Which sense does this line use?
    “I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  25. 25.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (b) The cactus was prickly when I touched it. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  26. 26.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Rohan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) cold (b) angry (c) happy
  27. 27.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The baby slept like a log.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  28. 28.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The kitten’s fur felt like silk. (b) The sun was a golden ball of fire. (c) The dog barked at the postman.
  29. 29.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Fatima’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.”
    (a) sad (b) scared (c) tired
  30. 30.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as glass”
    (a) soft (b) muddy (c) clear
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Meera gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.”
    (a) angry (b) scared (c) cold
  32. 32.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) okay (b) sticky (c) fine
  33. 33.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The golden sand glittered in the sun. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Diya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.”
    (a) cold (b) scared (c) tired
  35. 35.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crowded market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) market (b) crowded (c) buzzed
  36. 36.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My best friend is moving away___” sobbed Sahil.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  37. 37.What makes the sound “hoot”? (a) a clock (b) a leaking tap (c) an owl
  38. 38.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a feather”
    (a) heavy (b) dark (c) light
  39. 39.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) bored (b) scared (c) cold
  40. 40.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) window (b) roar (c) gentle

Answer key

  1. hearing
  2. speckled
  3. bored
  4. “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” whispered Simran.
  5. muddy
  6. The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.
  7. His heart was a drum during the race.
  8. showing
  9. The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  10. sad
  11. sad
  12. a frog
  13. The lake was a mirror for the mountains.
  14. pop
  15. simile
  16. “Why is the sky blue?” asked Riya.
  17. hearing
  18. whispered
  19. showing
  20. taste
  21. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  22. golden
  23. a question mark (?)
  24. smell
  25. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  26. happy
  27. simile
  28. The kitten’s fur felt like silk.
  29. scared
  30. clear
  31. scared
  32. sticky
  33. The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  34. scared
  35. crowded
  36. a comma (,)
  37. an owl
  38. light
  39. scared
  40. roar

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