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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 367 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (b) The glue felt sticky between my fingers. (c) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.
  2. 2.Which strong verb means “dived down suddenly”? (a) slammed (b) fluttered (c) plunged
  3. 3.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya was really cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is hungry? (a) Imran stamped his foot and slammed the door. (b) Imran gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (c) Imran was hungry.
  5. 5.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (b) The road was as straight as a ruler. (c) Kabir finished his homework early.
  6. 6.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) striped
  7. 7.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The earth smelled lovely after the first rain. (b) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  8. 8.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha beamed and hugged everyone in sight.”
    (a) cold (b) happy (c) angry
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Priya was tired.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  10. 10.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rough rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) scraped (b) rough (c) rope
  11. 11.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) hearing
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “How many stars are in the sky” asked Tara. (b) “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Tara. (c) How many stars are in the sky? asked Tara.
  14. 14.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Farhan. (b) Let us keep the surprise a secret, whispered Farhan. (c) “Let us keep the surprise a secret”, whispered Farhan.
  15. 15.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aisha’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  17. 17.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Ishaan ___ a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) scribbled (b) wrote (c) got
  18. 18.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My little brother is a chatterbox.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) nice (b) juicy (c) good
  20. 20.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The tired runner ___ over the finish line.”
    (a) staggered (b) had (c) walked
  21. 21.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost child ___ until his mother found him.”
    (a) sobbed (b) got (c) cried
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) hearing
  23. 23.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crowded market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) market (b) crowded (c) buzzed
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) good (b) tiny (c) okay
  25. 25.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) table (b) ding-dong (c) happy
  26. 26.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya stamped her foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) sad (b) angry (c) hungry
  27. 27.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a giraffe”
    (a) short (b) round (c) tall
  28. 28.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an owl”
    (a) silly (b) foolish (c) wise
  29. 29.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is happy? (a) Kavya was happy. (b) Kavya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked. (c) Kavya grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  30. 30.Which strong verb could replace “took” in this sentence?
    “The monkey took the banana from my hand.”
    (a) grabbed (b) crept (c) peered
  31. 31.Which strong verb could replace “burned” in this sentence?
    “The bonfire burned on Lohri night.”
    (a) stared (b) crept (c) blazed
  32. 32.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The mouse ate the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) nibbled (b) muttered (c) blazed
  33. 33.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The mysterious parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) arrived (b) mysterious (c) parcel
  34. 34.Which word fits the gap best?
    “How many stars are in the sky?” ___ Vihaan.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  35. 35.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) My father bought a new umbrella. (b) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow. (c) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  36. 36.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Who painted this lovely picture?” asked Farhan. (b) “Who painted this lovely picture”? asked Farhan. (c) “Who painted this lovely picture” asked Farhan.
  37. 37.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bitter gourd tasted bitter.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) taste
  38. 38.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleek car zoomed past us.”
    (a) zoomed (b) sleek (c) car
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev was really cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  40. 40.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The train left the station at nine. (b) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley. (c) The old bread was as hard as a rock.

Answer key

  1. The glue felt sticky between my fingers.
  2. plunged
  3. telling
  4. Imran gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  5. The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  6. striped
  7. The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.
  8. happy
  9. telling
  10. rough
  11. The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  12. hearing
  13. “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Tara.
  14. “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Farhan.
  15. showing
  16. smell
  17. scribbled
  18. metaphor
  19. juicy
  20. staggered
  21. sobbed
  22. smell
  23. crowded
  24. tiny
  25. ding-dong
  26. angry
  27. tall
  28. wise
  29. Kavya grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  30. grabbed
  31. blazed
  32. nibbled
  33. mysterious
  34. asked
  35. Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.
  36. “Who painted this lovely picture?” asked Farhan.
  37. taste
  38. sleek
  39. telling
  40. The old bread was as hard as a rock.

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