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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 374 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) hearing
  2. 2.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Who painted this lovely picture?” ___ Arjun.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  3. 3.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “That joke is so funny___” giggled Aryan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  4. 4.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The polished floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) squeaked (b) floor (c) polished
  5. 5.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My sandcastle got washed away,” ___ Tenzin.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  6. 6.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud___” sobbed Kavya.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  7. 7.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ladder wobbled under Dad’s feet.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) rickety
  8. 8.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The library is a treasure chest of stories. (b) The runner was as quick as lightning. (c) We ate rice and dal for dinner.
  9. 9.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crowded market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) market (b) buzzed (c) crowded
  10. 10.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Meera is happy? (a) Meera hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Meera was happy. (c) Meera stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill. (b) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (c) The fish market had a strong smell.
  12. 12.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The feather was as light as air.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  13. 13.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Farhan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) taste
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) smell
  16. 16.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Zoya drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) bored (b) tired (c) angry
  17. 17.Which strong verb means “threw with great force”? (a) blazed (b) tiptoed (c) hurled
  18. 18.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” ___ Joseph.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  19. 19.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Let us keep the surprise a secret___” whispered Saanvi.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  20. 20.What makes the sound “boom”? (a) a snake (b) a duck (c) thunder
  21. 21.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Meera is tired? (a) Meera was tired. (b) Meera beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (c) Meera could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  22. 22.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (b) The busy market was a beehive. (c) The wrestler was as strong as an ox.
  23. 23.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Kabir ___ the door when he was cross.”
    (a) slammed (b) went (c) shut
  24. 24.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My little brother is a chatterbox. (b) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (c) The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  25. 25.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The icy wind howled all night.”
    (a) wind (b) icy (c) howled
  26. 26.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ wind howled all night.”
    (a) icy (b) okay (c) nice
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is sad? (a) Tears filled Ananya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor. (b) Ananya was sad. (c) Ananya counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  29. 29.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Do not tell anyone about the party”, whispered Tara. (b) Do not tell anyone about the party, whispered Tara. (c) “Do not tell anyone about the party,” whispered Tara.
  30. 30.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The raindrops went pitter-patter on the roof.”
    (a) pitter-patter (b) roof (c) raindrops
  31. 31.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) good (b) tiny (c) nice
  32. 32.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “Tara looked into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) nibbled (b) strolled (c) peered
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) good (b) golden (c) nice
  34. 34.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) loud (b) cold (c) hot
  35. 35.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shiny pebbles sparkled in the stream.”
    (a) sparkled (b) pebbles (c) shiny
  36. 36.What makes the sound “pop”? (a) a jump into a pool (b) a balloon (c) the wind
  37. 37.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Kabir finished his homework early. (b) The lake was a mirror for the mountains. (c) The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  38. 38.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The doorbell went ___ at noon.”
    (a) roar (b) ding-dong (c) hoot
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  40. 40.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dev ___ past his sleeping baby sister.”
    (a) walked (b) had (c) tiptoed

Answer key

  1. smell
  2. asked
  3. a comma (,)
  4. polished
  5. sobbed
  6. a comma (,)
  7. rickety
  8. The runner was as quick as lightning.
  9. crowded
  10. Meera hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  11. The crowd cheered loudly for our team.
  12. simile
  13. showing
  14. sight
  15. touch
  16. bored
  17. hurled
  18. asked
  19. a comma (,)
  20. thunder
  21. Meera could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  22. The wrestler was as strong as an ox.
  23. slammed
  24. The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  25. icy
  26. simile
  27. icy
  28. Tears filled Ananya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.
  29. “Do not tell anyone about the party,” whispered Tara.
  30. pitter-patter
  31. tiny
  32. peered
  33. golden
  34. cold
  35. shiny
  36. a balloon
  37. The lake was a mirror for the mountains.
  38. ding-dong
  39. showing
  40. tiptoed

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