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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 380 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) hearing
  2. 2.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “It rained all night in our town.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) woof (b) pencil (c) mango
  4. 4.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) okay (b) fine (c) sticky
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Nisha is hungry? (a) Nisha was hungry. (b) Nisha’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (c) A tear rolled slowly down Nisha’s cheek.
  6. 6.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tara is sad? (a) Tara sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing. (b) Tara was sad. (c) Tara’s eyelids drooped, and she yawned again and again.
  7. 7.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) yellow (b) slowly (c) splash
  8. 8.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Is it time for lunch yet?” ___ Kavya.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  9. 9.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Yash’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) angry
  10. 10.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The bowler ___ the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) did (b) hurled (c) threw
  11. 11.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Arjun’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  12. 12.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Grab the rope___” shouted Ishaan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  13. 13.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The wet soap slipped from my hands. (b) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises. (c) The lake sparkled under the full moon.
  14. 14.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “Grandma drank her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) slammed (b) trudged (c) sipped
  15. 15.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is scared? (a) Manav was scared. (b) Manav could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (c) Manav gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  16. 16.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The tiny ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) tiny (b) carried (c) ant
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is sad? (a) Farhan was sad. (b) Tears filled Farhan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor. (c) Farhan’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  18. 18.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Come back here, Moti! shouted Aisha. (b) “Come back here, Moti!” shouted Aisha. (c) “Come back here, Moti” shouted Aisha.
  19. 19.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My little brother is a chatterbox.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  20. 20.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The wind went whoosh through the trees.”
    (a) trees (b) whoosh (c) wind
  21. 21.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  22. 22.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The diver fell into the deep pool.”
    (a) scribbled (b) crept (c) plunged
  23. 23.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is angry? (a) Joseph was angry. (b) Joseph froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (c) Joseph stamped his foot and slammed the door.
  24. 24.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The dazzling fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) fireworks (b) lit (c) dazzling
  25. 25.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (b) The traffic jam was a long metal snake. (c) The cat sat on the warm mat.
  26. 26.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Arjun was really hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wet soap slipped from my hands.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) smell
  28. 28.Which strong verb means “took tiny little bites”? (a) scribbled (b) whispered (c) nibbled
  29. 29.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The microwave gave a ___ when the milk was hot.”
    (a) crackle (b) hoot (c) beep
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Saanvi threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!””
    (a) cold (b) angry (c) tired
  31. 31.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (b) The children played cricket after school. (c) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  32. 32.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  33. 33.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The taxis honk in the busy street.”
    (a) street (b) taxis (c) honk
  34. 34.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) scrubbed (b) cleaned (c) made
  35. 35.Which sense does this line use?
    “The golden sand glittered in the sun.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) sight
  36. 36.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My little sister is as busy as a bee. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) The snow was a white blanket on the hills.
  37. 37.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an owl”
    (a) silly (b) foolish (c) wise
  38. 38.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” ___ Ishaan.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  39. 39.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The cat sat on the warm mat. (b) The playground was an oven in May. (c) My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  40. 40.Which sense does this line use?
    “The medicine had a bitter taste.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch

Answer key

  1. smell
  2. neither
  3. woof
  4. sticky
  5. Nisha’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  6. Tara sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  7. splash
  8. asked
  9. sad
  10. hurled
  11. showing
  12. an exclamation mark (!)
  13. The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises.
  14. sipped
  15. Manav gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  16. tiny
  17. Tears filled Farhan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  18. “Come back here, Moti!” shouted Aisha.
  19. metaphor
  20. whoosh
  21. showing
  22. plunged
  23. Joseph stamped his foot and slammed the door.
  24. dazzling
  25. The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  26. telling
  27. touch
  28. nibbled
  29. beep
  30. angry
  31. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  32. showing
  33. honk
  34. scrubbed
  35. sight
  36. My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  37. wise
  38. asked
  39. The playground was an oven in May.
  40. taste

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