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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 383 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Imran was sad.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  2. 2.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill. (b) The fog was a grey curtain over the town. (c) The teacher wrote the date on the board.
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) baa (b) happy (c) river
  4. 4.Which strong verb means “flew high in the sky”? (a) raced (b) soared (c) staggered
  5. 5.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) sight
  6. 6.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  7. 7.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rickety ladder wobbled under Dad’s feet.”
    (a) wobbled (b) ladder (c) rickety
  8. 8.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” ___ Vihaan.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Yash was angry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  10. 10.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fish market had a strong smell.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) smell
  11. 11.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is tired? (a) Aarav’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again. (b) Aarav was tired. (c) Aarav gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Riya felt very angry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  13. 13.Which strong verb means “walked slowly with heavy steps”? (a) slammed (b) hurled (c) trudged
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The earth smelled lovely after the first rain.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) taste
  15. 15.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The dazzling fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) dazzling (b) lit (c) fireworks
  16. 16.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (b) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (c) My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “We heard the train whistle far away.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) taste
  18. 18.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” ___ Nisha.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) asked
  19. 19.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I miss my grandma so much”, sobbed Aryan. (b) I miss my grandma so much, sobbed Aryan. (c) “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Aryan.
  20. 20.Which strong verb means “walked in a slow, relaxed way”? (a) strolled (b) muttered (c) slammed
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bitter gourd tasted bitter.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  22. 22.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) quickly (c) splash
  23. 23.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The moon was a silver plate in the sky. (b) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow. (c) It rained all night in our town.
  24. 24.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tall (b) yellow (c) moo
  25. 25.Which sense does this line use?
    “The new bicycle shone bright red.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  26. 26.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) kind (b) crackle (c) green
  27. 27.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The baby slept like a log.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  28. 28.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gloomy cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) echoed (b) cave (c) gloomy
  29. 29.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) tossed (b) whispered (c) dashed
  30. 30.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aryan is happy? (a) Aryan’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again. (b) Aryan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Aryan was happy.
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “The crowd cheered loudly for our team.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) touch
  32. 32.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” ___ Sahil.
    (a) shouted (b) asked (c) whispered
  33. 33.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pakoras ___ in the hot oil.”
    (a) drip (b) sizzle (c) pop
  34. 34.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “Tara looked into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) shouted (b) dashed (c) peered
  35. 35.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The feather was as light as air.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  36. 36.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aryan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.”
    (a) hungry (b) cold (c) tired
  37. 37.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) What time does the train leave? asked Sneha. (b) “What time does the train leave?” asked Sneha. (c) “What time does the train leave” asked Sneha.
  38. 38.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The colourful kite danced in the sky.”
    (a) colourful (b) kite (c) danced
  39. 39.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (b) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill. (c) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  40. 40.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) river (c) meow

Answer key

  1. telling
  2. The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  3. baa
  4. soared
  5. taste
  6. metaphor
  7. rickety
  8. giggled
  9. telling
  10. smell
  11. Aarav’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.
  12. telling
  13. trudged
  14. smell
  15. dazzling
  16. The stars were diamonds in the night sky.
  17. hearing
  18. whispered
  19. “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Aryan.
  20. strolled
  21. taste
  22. splash
  23. Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.
  24. moo
  25. sight
  26. crackle
  27. simile
  28. gloomy
  29. dashed
  30. Aryan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  31. hearing
  32. whispered
  33. sizzle
  34. peered
  35. simile
  36. tired
  37. “What time does the train leave?” asked Sneha.
  38. colourful
  39. Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.
  40. meow

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