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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 389 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “The clay cup felt hot in my hands.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) sight
  2. 2.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Simran is angry? (a) Simran’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (b) Simran folded her arms and glared at her brother. (c) Simran was angry.
  3. 3.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost child ___ until his mother found him.”
    (a) sobbed (b) cried (c) got
  4. 4.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) nice (b) chubby (c) good
  5. 5.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The train left the station at nine.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  6. 6.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (b) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (c) Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.
  7. 7.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the exam has begun,” whispered Dev. (b) “Shh, the exam has begun”, whispered Dev. (c) “Shh, the exam has begun” whispered Dev.
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aryan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  9. 9.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My sandcastle got washed away,” ___ Sahil.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  10. 10.What makes the sound “baa”? (a) a sheep (b) a crisp papad (c) a snake
  11. 11.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shimmering peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) peacock (b) spread (c) shimmering
  12. 12.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Riya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) tired (b) scared (c) cold
  13. 13.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “What time does the train leave___” asked Imran.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  14. 14.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The dry logs crackle in the campfire.”
    (a) logs (b) crackle (c) dry
  15. 15.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  16. 16.Which strong verb means “moved slowly and quietly”? (a) sobbed (b) tumbled (c) crept
  17. 17.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My best friend is moving away___” sobbed Kavya.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  18. 18.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The girls ___ at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) got (b) giggled (c) laughed
  19. 19.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) clang (b) green (c) pencil
  20. 20.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Dad is a walking dictionary. (b) The runner was as quick as lightning. (c) We planted a mango tree in the garden.
  21. 21.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Diya ___ her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) held (b) clutched (c) went
  22. 22.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The leaking tap went drip in the dark.”
    (a) dark (b) drip (c) tap
  23. 23.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The puppy gave a happy woof at the gate.”
    (a) woof (b) gate (c) puppy
  24. 24.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake___” whispered Kabir.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  25. 25.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Zoya is scared? (a) Zoya gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut. (b) Zoya sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (c) Zoya was scared.
  26. 26.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The leaking tap went ___ in the dark.”
    (a) quack (b) drip (c) knock
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “The new bicycle shone bright red.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) sight
  28. 28.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sahil hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) happy (b) sad (c) cold
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The feathery grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) grass (b) tickled (c) feathery
  31. 31.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rough rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) rope (b) scraped (c) rough
  32. 32.What makes the sound “neigh”? (a) thunder (b) a horse (c) a sheep
  33. 33.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is happy? (a) Neel kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch. (b) Neel was happy. (c) Neel grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  34. 34.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) beep (c) garden
  35. 35.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Come back here, Moti!” ___ Arjun.
    (a) giggled (b) whispered (c) shouted
  36. 36.Which strong verb means “cleaned by rubbing hard”? (a) crawled (b) scrubbed (c) stared
  37. 37.What makes the sound “pitter-patter”? (a) a frog (b) a pig (c) raindrops
  38. 38.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) taste
  39. 39.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Her bedroom is a pigsty. (b) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (c) The cat sat on the warm mat.
  40. 40.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” ___ Arjun.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) asked

Answer key

  1. touch
  2. Simran folded her arms and glared at her brother.
  3. sobbed
  4. chubby
  5. neither
  6. The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  7. “Shh, the exam has begun,” whispered Dev.
  8. showing
  9. sobbed
  10. a sheep
  11. shimmering
  12. scared
  13. a question mark (?)
  14. crackle
  15. showing
  16. crept
  17. a comma (,)
  18. giggled
  19. clang
  20. Dad is a walking dictionary.
  21. clutched
  22. drip
  23. woof
  24. a comma (,)
  25. Zoya gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.
  26. drip
  27. sight
  28. happy
  29. hearing
  30. feathery
  31. rough
  32. a horse
  33. Neel grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  34. beep
  35. shouted
  36. scrubbed
  37. raindrops
  38. sight
  39. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  40. whispered

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