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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 394 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Your silly face makes me laugh, giggled Farhan. (b) “Your silly face makes me laugh,” giggled Farhan. (c) “Your silly face makes me laugh” giggled Farhan.
  2. 2.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “I bit the crisp papad with a ___.”
    (a) crunch (b) roar (c) vroom
  3. 3.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “May I borrow your eraser” asked Dev. (b) “May I borrow your eraser?” asked Dev. (c) May I borrow your eraser? asked Dev.
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is cold? (a) Imran was cold. (b) Imran laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (c) Imran rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.
  5. 5.What makes the sound “sizzle”? (a) pakoras in hot oil (b) the wind (c) a sparrow
  6. 6.Which strong verb means “shut hard and loudly”? (a) tumbled (b) slammed (c) tiptoed
  7. 7.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel felt very angry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  8. 8.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) cushion (b) sank (c) squishy
  9. 9.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) nice (b) creaky (c) good
  10. 10.Which sense does this line use?
    “The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) touch
  11. 11.Which word fits the gap best?
    “How many stars are in the sky?” ___ Rohan.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  12. 12.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The mouse ate the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) wandered (b) nibbled (c) leapt
  13. 13.Which strong verb means “ate very fast and greedily”? (a) hurled (b) gobbled (c) blazed
  14. 14.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Dev is scared? (a) Dev gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut. (b) Dev hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Dev was scared.
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) taste
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) sight
  17. 17.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus. (b) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (c) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.
  18. 18.Which sense does this line use?
    “I saw a rainbow over the green fields.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) smell
  19. 19.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) happy (b) bored (c) scared
  20. 20.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) okay (b) sleepy (c) good
  21. 21.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (b) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (c) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  22. 22.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is sad? (a) Sahil was sad. (b) Sahil froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (c) Sahil sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) sight
  24. 24.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Zoya is cold? (a) Zoya was cold. (b) Zoya’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter. (c) Zoya sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  25. 25.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The dazzling fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) dazzling (b) lit (c) fireworks
  26. 26.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is bored? (a) Joseph counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (b) Joseph folded his arms and glared at his brother. (c) Joseph was bored.
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shaggy dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) dog (b) shaggy (c) barked
  28. 28.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The little lamb gave a soft ___.”
    (a) splash (b) baa (c) slurp
  29. 29.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The sea tasted very salty. (b) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (c) The cactus was prickly when I touched it.
  30. 30.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Kabir ___ the door when he was cross.”
    (a) shut (b) did (c) slammed
  31. 31.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The thunder crashed and roared. (b) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (c) The bitter gourd tasted bitter.
  32. 32.Which strong verb could replace “jumped” in this sentence?
    “The deer jumped over the fallen log.”
    (a) scribbled (b) leapt (c) clutched
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kite danced in the sky.”
    (a) colourful (b) nice (c) fine
  34. 34.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Fatima. (b) “My goldfish has gone missing” sobbed Fatima. (c) My goldfish has gone missing, sobbed Fatima.
  35. 35.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Grab the rope!” ___ Yash.
    (a) shouted (b) giggled (c) whispered
  36. 36.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Manav could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  37. 37.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “The two friends ran to the gate to see who was fastest.”
    (a) tumbled (b) raced (c) hurled
  38. 38.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “What time does the train leave” asked Tenzin. (b) “What time does the train leave”? asked Tenzin. (c) “What time does the train leave?” asked Tenzin.
  39. 39.Which strong verb means “scattered tiny bits over something”? (a) sipped (b) sprinkled (c) tumbled
  40. 40.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile

Answer key

  1. “Your silly face makes me laugh,” giggled Farhan.
  2. crunch
  3. “May I borrow your eraser?” asked Dev.
  4. Imran rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.
  5. pakoras in hot oil
  6. slammed
  7. telling
  8. squishy
  9. creaky
  10. taste
  11. asked
  12. nibbled
  13. gobbled
  14. Dev gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut.
  15. taste
  16. smell
  17. The clouds were cotton balls in the sky.
  18. sight
  19. happy
  20. sleepy
  21. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  22. Sahil sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  23. sight
  24. Zoya’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.
  25. dazzling
  26. Joseph counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  27. shaggy
  28. baa
  29. The sea tasted very salty.
  30. slammed
  31. The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  32. leapt
  33. colourful
  34. “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Fatima.
  35. shouted
  36. showing
  37. raced
  38. “What time does the train leave?” asked Tenzin.
  39. sprinkled
  40. metaphor

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