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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 40 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “I tasted the soup and added more salt.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) taste
  2. 2.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The thunder went ___ over the hills.”
    (a) boom (b) crackle (c) baa
  3. 3.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the baby is sleeping___” whispered Riya.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  4. 4.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) fine (b) polished (c) nice
  5. 5.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The traffic jam was a long metal snake. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  6. 6.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “Meera ran to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) gobbled (b) giggled (c) dashed
  7. 7.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I miss my grandma so much___” sobbed Diya.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  8. 8.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pebbles sparkled in the stream.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) shiny
  9. 9.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) bored (b) happy (c) cold
  10. 10.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is sad? (a) Kabir sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Kabir was sad. (c) A tear rolled slowly down Kabir’s cheek.
  11. 11.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My goldfish has gone missing”, sobbed Tara. (b) “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Tara. (c) My goldfish has gone missing, sobbed Tara.
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) taste
  13. 13.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (b) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour. (c) The river water felt icy on my feet.
  14. 14.Which strong verb could replace “shut” in this sentence?
    “Kabir shut the door when he was cross.”
    (a) slammed (b) raced (c) tiptoed
  15. 15.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The pillow was as soft as a cloud.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  16. 16.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Joseph’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.”
    (a) happy (b) sad (c) cold
  17. 17.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) dazzling
  18. 18.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Rohan’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) scared (b) happy (c) bored
  19. 19.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock”, giggled Ananya. (b) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock” giggled Ananya. (c) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Ananya.
  20. 20.What makes the sound “hoot”? (a) an owl (b) a balloon (c) a frog
  21. 21.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a rock”
    (a) soft (b) hard (c) fluffy
  22. 22.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) did (b) spoke (c) whispered
  23. 23.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a pancake”
    (a) flat (b) tall (c) round
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (b) I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall. (c) I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  25. 25.Which strong verb could replace “moved” in this sentence?
    “The baby moved across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) crawled (b) munched (c) peered
  26. 26.Which word fits the gap best?
    “How many stars are in the sky?” ___ Ananya.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  27. 27.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is sad? (a) Imran sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing. (b) Imran gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (c) Imran was sad.
  28. 28.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The two friends ___ to the gate to see who was fastest.”
    (a) raced (b) ran (c) had
  29. 29.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) window (c) drip
  30. 30.What makes the sound “clang”? (a) a lion (b) a car horn (c) a steel plate falling
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Simran’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.”
    (a) scared (b) hungry (c) sad
  32. 32.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Saanvi froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cushion sank under me.”
    (a) squishy (b) good (c) fine
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.”
    (a) tired (b) angry (c) scared
  35. 35.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Nisha is hungry? (a) Nisha beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (b) Nisha was hungry. (c) Nisha licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  36. 36.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) river (b) crackle (c) slowly
  37. 37.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Joseph dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.”
    (a) happy (b) tired (c) hungry
  38. 38.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) We heard the train whistle far away. (b) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  39. 39.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pakoras sizzle in the hot oil.”
    (a) sizzle (b) pakoras (c) oil
  40. 40.Which strong verb means “ate very fast and greedily”? (a) crept (b) wandered (c) gobbled

Answer key

  1. taste
  2. boom
  3. a comma (,)
  4. polished
  5. The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  6. dashed
  7. a comma (,)
  8. shiny
  9. happy
  10. A tear rolled slowly down Kabir’s cheek.
  11. “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Tara.
  12. sight
  13. The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.
  14. slammed
  15. simile
  16. sad
  17. dazzling
  18. scared
  19. “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Ananya.
  20. an owl
  21. hard
  22. whispered
  23. flat
  24. I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.
  25. crawled
  26. asked
  27. Imran sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  28. raced
  29. drip
  30. a steel plate falling
  31. scared
  32. showing
  33. squishy
  34. tired
  35. Nisha licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  36. crackle
  37. tired
  38. We heard the train whistle far away.
  39. sizzle
  40. gobbled

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