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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 413 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) honk (c) kind
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) sight
  3. 3.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Is it time for lunch yet? asked Imran. (b) “Is it time for lunch yet” asked Imran. (c) “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Imran.
  4. 4.Which strong verb means “took tiny little bites”? (a) tiptoed (b) nibbled (c) hurled
  5. 5.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Can I have one more laddoo, please”? asked Manav. (b) “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Manav. (c) “Can I have one more laddoo, please” asked Manav.
  6. 6.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the exam has begun___” whispered Kabir.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  7. 7.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aryan drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) hungry (b) sad (c) bored
  8. 8.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a peacock”
    (a) shy (b) humble (c) proud
  9. 9.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat” giggled Saanvi. (b) Ha ha, the goat ate your hat, giggled Saanvi. (c) “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” giggled Saanvi.
  10. 10.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Priya was scared.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  11. 11.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is cold? (a) Yash was cold. (b) Yash’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter. (c) Yash folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  12. 12.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) did (b) spoke (c) whispered
  13. 13.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The blooming garden smelled of roses.”
    (a) smelled (b) blooming (c) garden
  14. 14.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) river (b) pop (c) chair
  15. 15.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) I have lost my favourite teddy, sobbed Saanvi. (b) “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Saanvi. (c) “I have lost my favourite teddy”, sobbed Saanvi.
  16. 16.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The raindrops went ___ on the roof.”
    (a) croak (b) pitter-patter (c) knock
  17. 17.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink. (b) The thunder crashed and roared. (c) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  18. 18.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The lion let out a mighty roar.”
    (a) roar (b) mighty (c) lion
  19. 19.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The oranges ___ out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) came (b) fell (c) tumbled
  20. 20.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Come back here, Moti___” shouted Aarav.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a question mark (?)
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) fine (b) good (c) cheeky
  22. 22.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is happy? (a) Saanvi hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Saanvi’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home. (c) Saanvi was happy.
  23. 23.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a pancake”
    (a) tall (b) flat (c) round
  24. 24.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The rooster crowed cock-a-doodle-doo at dawn.”
    (a) rooster (b) dawn (c) cock-a-doodle-doo
  25. 25.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The dog barked at the postman.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  26. 26.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “His heart was a drum during the race.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  27. 27.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The frogs ___ all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) croak (b) hiss (c) crunch
  28. 28.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ car zoomed past us.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) sleek
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fluffy kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) fluffy (b) curled (c) kitten
  30. 30.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pakoras ___ in the hot oil.”
    (a) honk (b) sizzle (c) vroom
  31. 31.What makes the sound “click”? (a) a bee (b) a camera (c) a dog
  32. 32.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gigantic tree towered over the house.”
    (a) tree (b) towered (c) gigantic
  33. 33.Which strong verb means “cleaned by rubbing hard”? (a) scrubbed (b) giggled (c) glanced
  34. 34.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Grab the rope!” shouted Fatima. (b) “Grab the rope” shouted Fatima. (c) Grab the rope! shouted Fatima.
  35. 35.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleek car zoomed past us.”
    (a) car (b) sleek (c) zoomed
  36. 36.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, we are in the library___” whispered Maria.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  37. 37.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The balloon burst with a ___.”
    (a) chirp (b) beep (c) pop
  38. 38.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gloomy cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) cave (b) gloomy (c) echoed
  39. 39.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The fireworks burst like giant flowers.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  40. 40.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Priya was cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing

Answer key

  1. honk
  2. smell
  3. “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Imran.
  4. nibbled
  5. “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Manav.
  6. a comma (,)
  7. bored
  8. proud
  9. “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” giggled Saanvi.
  10. telling
  11. Yash’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  12. whispered
  13. blooming
  14. pop
  15. “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Saanvi.
  16. pitter-patter
  17. The thunder crashed and roared.
  18. roar
  19. tumbled
  20. an exclamation mark (!)
  21. cheeky
  22. Saanvi hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  23. flat
  24. cock-a-doodle-doo
  25. neither
  26. metaphor
  27. croak
  28. sleek
  29. fluffy
  30. sizzle
  31. a camera
  32. gigantic
  33. scrubbed
  34. “Grab the rope!” shouted Fatima.
  35. sleek
  36. a comma (,)
  37. pop
  38. gloomy
  39. simile
  40. telling

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