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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 416 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) striped (b) good (c) okay
  2. 2.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The coach ___ to us from across the big field.”
    (a) spoke (b) made (c) shouted
  3. 3.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Help, the boat is sinking___” shouted Yash.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  4. 4.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tara folded her arms and glared at her brother.”
    (a) bored (b) tired (c) angry
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is tired? (a) Ishaan was tired. (b) Ishaan folded his arms and glared at his brother. (c) Ishaan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.
  6. 6.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) fine (b) fluffy (c) okay
  7. 7.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Let us keep the surprise a secret” whispered Simran. (b) “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Simran. (c) Let us keep the surprise a secret, whispered Simran.
  8. 8.Which sentence is a simile? (a) His heart was a drum during the race. (b) The feather was as light as air. (c) We planted a mango tree in the garden.
  9. 9.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The heavy bag fell to the floor with a ___.”
    (a) thud (b) chirp (c) neigh
  10. 10.Which strong verb means “walked slowly with heavy steps”? (a) whispered (b) peered (c) trudged
  11. 11.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) whoosh (c) yellow
  12. 12.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “Grandma drank her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) dashed (b) clutched (c) sipped
  13. 13.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “The eagle flew above the hills.”
    (a) munched (b) giggled (c) soared
  14. 14.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kavya was really scared.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  15. 15.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The motorbike went vroom down the road.”
    (a) motorbike (b) road (c) vroom
  16. 16.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) drank (b) sipped (c) had
  17. 17.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) okay (b) naughty (c) nice
  18. 18.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Manav beamed and hugged everyone in sight.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) polished (b) nice (c) okay
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) touch
  21. 21.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Riya stamped her foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  22. 22.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a giraffe”
    (a) tall (b) short (c) round
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ car zoomed past us.”
    (a) fine (b) sleek (c) nice
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) enormous (b) okay (c) nice
  25. 25.Which sense does this line use?
    “The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) touch
  26. 26.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” ___ Vihaan.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) tiny (b) fine (c) good
  28. 28.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the film is starting___” whispered Fatima.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  29. 29.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) I felt the cool breeze on my face. (b) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (c) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.
  30. 30.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “May I borrow your eraser___” asked Tara.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  31. 31.Which strong verb means “jumped high or far”? (a) leapt (b) clutched (c) giggled
  32. 32.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sea tasted very salty.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) hearing
  33. 33.What makes the sound “slurp”? (a) a noisy drinker (b) a camera (c) a snake
  34. 34.Which strong verb could replace “took” in this sentence?
    “The monkey took the banana from my hand.”
    (a) grabbed (b) dashed (c) nibbled
  35. 35.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is sad? (a) Joseph was sad. (b) Joseph’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (c) Tears filled Joseph’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  36. 36.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Pooja is cold? (a) Pooja froze and held her breath as the floor creaked. (b) Pooja shivered and stamped her feet in the snow. (c) Pooja was cold.
  37. 37.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The traffic jam was a long metal snake. (b) The fireworks burst like giant flowers. (c) The baby slept in the afternoon.
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Arjun stamped his foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) happy (b) bored (c) angry
  39. 39.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Hee hee, stop tickling me___” giggled Priya.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  40. 40.Which strong verb means “walked unsteadily, almost falling”? (a) tossed (b) muttered (c) staggered

Answer key

  1. striped
  2. shouted
  3. an exclamation mark (!)
  4. angry
  5. Ishaan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.
  6. fluffy
  7. “Let us keep the surprise a secret,” whispered Simran.
  8. The feather was as light as air.
  9. thud
  10. trudged
  11. whoosh
  12. sipped
  13. soared
  14. telling
  15. vroom
  16. sipped
  17. naughty
  18. showing
  19. polished
  20. sight
  21. showing
  22. tall
  23. sleek
  24. enormous
  25. smell
  26. giggled
  27. tiny
  28. a comma (,)
  29. The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.
  30. a question mark (?)
  31. leapt
  32. taste
  33. a noisy drinker
  34. grabbed
  35. Tears filled Joseph’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  36. Pooja shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.
  37. The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  38. angry
  39. a comma (,)
  40. staggered

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