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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 425 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Your silly face makes me laugh___” giggled Diya.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  2. 2.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) yellow (b) hiss (c) quickly
  3. 3.Which word fits the gap best?
    “What time does the train leave?” ___ Sahil.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Meera sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Joseph dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  6. 6.Which strong verb means “took a very quick look”? (a) grabbed (b) glanced (c) scribbled
  7. 7.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The muddy pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) muddy (b) had (c) pond
  8. 8.Which strong verb means “wrote quickly and untidily”? (a) glanced (b) strolled (c) scribbled
  9. 9.Which sense does this line use?
    “The warm sand tickled my toes.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) sight
  10. 10.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Kabir’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) scared (b) sad (c) happy
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh. (b) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  12. 12.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The thunder crashed and roared. (b) I felt the cool breeze on my face. (c) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  13. 13.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is angry? (a) Fatima laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (b) Fatima was angry. (c) Fatima’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  14. 14.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tall (b) teacher (c) splash
  15. 15.Which word fits the gap best?
    “What time does the train leave?” ___ Tara.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  16. 16.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My kite is torn to pieces”, sobbed Fatima. (b) “My kite is torn to pieces” sobbed Fatima. (c) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Fatima.
  17. 17.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  18. 18.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) sipped (b) did (c) drank
  19. 19.Which strong verb means “ate very fast and greedily”? (a) gobbled (b) dashed (c) plunged
  20. 20.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Is it time for lunch yet”? asked Rohan. (b) Is it time for lunch yet? asked Rohan. (c) “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Rohan.
  21. 21.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crowded market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) buzzed (b) crowded (c) market
  22. 22.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is sad? (a) Saanvi was sad. (b) Saanvi hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) A tear rolled slowly down Saanvi’s cheek.
  23. 23.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Maria’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.”
    (a) hungry (b) happy (c) scared
  24. 24.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Fatima. (b) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Fatima. (c) “Shh, the film is starting”, whispered Fatima.
  25. 25.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) green (b) table (c) clang
  26. 26.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tears filled Aarav’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “We watched the peacock open its blue tail.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) smell
  28. 28.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The runner was as quick as lightning. (b) The busy market was a beehive. (c) The children played cricket after school.
  29. 29.Which strong verb means “spoke very softly”? (a) trudged (b) sipped (c) whispered
  30. 30.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is sad? (a) Yash was sad. (b) Yash’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (c) Tears filled Yash’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Pooja froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) scared
  32. 32.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The puppy gave a happy ___ at the gate.”
    (a) woof (b) click (c) snip
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ tree towered over the house.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) gigantic
  34. 34.What makes the sound “vroom”? (a) a motorbike (b) a pair of scissors (c) an owl
  35. 35.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) sticky
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) sight
  37. 37.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud___” sobbed Vihaan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  38. 38.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please___” asked Arjun.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  39. 39.Which strong verb means “moved very fast to win”? (a) raced (b) whispered (c) slammed
  40. 40.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The deer ___ over the fallen log.”
    (a) came (b) leapt (c) jumped

Answer key

  1. a comma (,)
  2. hiss
  3. asked
  4. showing
  5. showing
  6. glanced
  7. muddy
  8. scribbled
  9. touch
  10. sad
  11. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  12. I felt the cool breeze on my face.
  13. Fatima’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.
  14. splash
  15. asked
  16. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Fatima.
  17. The old door creaked as it opened.
  18. sipped
  19. gobbled
  20. “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Rohan.
  21. crowded
  22. A tear rolled slowly down Saanvi’s cheek.
  23. scared
  24. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Fatima.
  25. clang
  26. showing
  27. sight
  28. The runner was as quick as lightning.
  29. whispered
  30. Tears filled Yash’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  31. scared
  32. woof
  33. gigantic
  34. a motorbike
  35. sticky
  36. smell
  37. a comma (,)
  38. a question mark (?)
  39. raced
  40. leapt

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