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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 43 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (b) The fish market had a strong smell. (c) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.
  2. 2.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “How many stars are in the sky”? asked Sahil. (b) “How many stars are in the sky” asked Sahil. (c) “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Sahil.
  3. 3.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a rock”
    (a) soft (b) fluffy (c) hard
  4. 4.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “How many stars are in the sky” asked Aryan. (b) “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Aryan. (c) How many stars are in the sky? asked Aryan.
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Vihaan felt very hungry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  6. 6.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ giant snored under the tree.”
    (a) grumpy (b) okay (c) nice
  7. 7.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kabir grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  8. 8.What makes the sound “buzz”? (a) a snake (b) a horse (c) a bee
  9. 9.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a mouse”
    (a) quiet (b) huge (c) loud
  10. 10.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan was really happy.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  11. 11.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “After the race, Kabir ___ a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) drank (b) gulped (c) did
  12. 12.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Dev grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) happy (b) sad (c) scared
  13. 13.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Maria could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) sad (b) tired (c) angry
  14. 14.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My best friend is moving away___” sobbed Imran.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  15. 15.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) nice (b) fluffy (c) okay
  16. 16.What makes the sound “knock”? (a) a visitor at the door (b) a duck (c) a sparrow
  17. 17.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Maria felt very hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  18. 18.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The mouse ___ the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) ate (b) nibbled (c) went
  19. 19.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The snow was a white blanket on the hills. (b) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (c) The children played cricket after school.
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) hearing
  21. 21.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My goldfish has gone missing,” ___ Simran.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  22. 22.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as grass”
    (a) loud (b) green (c) red
  23. 23.What makes the sound “boom”? (a) a sparrow (b) a clock (c) thunder
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich. (b) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy. (c) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) cheeky
  26. 26.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (b) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill. (c) The thunder crashed and roared.
  27. 27.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The cow gave a long ___ from the shed.”
    (a) moo (b) whoosh (c) hoot
  28. 28.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shimmering peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) spread (b) peacock (c) shimmering
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “The clay cup felt hot in my hands.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  30. 30.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sea tasted very salty.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) smell
  31. 31.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Riya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) cold (b) hungry (c) tired
  32. 32.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cushion sank under me.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) squishy
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “The snail felt slimy on my palm.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  34. 34.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The taxis ___ in the busy street.”
    (a) pop (b) woof (c) honk
  35. 35.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “The coach spoke to us from across the big field.”
    (a) tossed (b) plunged (c) shouted
  36. 36.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) nice (b) striped (c) fine
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) sticky
  38. 38.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The diver ___ into the deep pool.”
    (a) went (b) plunged (c) fell
  39. 39.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The steaming soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) filled (b) soup (c) steaming
  40. 40.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The narrow road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) twisted (b) narrow (c) road

Answer key

  1. The bitter gourd tasted bitter.
  2. “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Sahil.
  3. hard
  4. “How many stars are in the sky?” asked Aryan.
  5. telling
  6. grumpy
  7. showing
  8. a bee
  9. quiet
  10. telling
  11. gulped
  12. happy
  13. tired
  14. a comma (,)
  15. fluffy
  16. a visitor at the door
  17. telling
  18. nibbled
  19. The snow was a white blanket on the hills.
  20. smell
  21. sobbed
  22. green
  23. thunder
  24. The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.
  25. cheeky
  26. Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.
  27. moo
  28. shimmering
  29. touch
  30. taste
  31. cold
  32. squishy
  33. touch
  34. honk
  35. shouted
  36. striped
  37. sticky
  38. plunged
  39. steaming
  40. narrow

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