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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 434 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is bored? (a) Rohan was bored. (b) Rohan kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard. (c) Rohan laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  2. 2.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The wind went whoosh through the trees.”
    (a) wind (b) whoosh (c) trees
  3. 3.What makes the sound “neigh”? (a) a snake (b) a visitor at the door (c) a horse
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is bored? (a) Joseph kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard. (b) Joseph was bored. (c) Joseph could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.
  5. 5.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” ___ Arjun.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet. (b) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (c) The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  7. 7.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “We walked home through the deep mud.”
    (a) peered (b) trudged (c) whispered
  8. 8.What makes the sound “beep”? (a) a duck (b) a microwave (c) a frog
  9. 9.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Meera watered the plants in the morning.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  10. 10.Which strong verb means “burned brightly and fiercely”? (a) blazed (b) scribbled (c) grabbed
  11. 11.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) brave (b) slow (c) soft
  12. 12.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy. (b) The cactus was prickly when I touched it. (c) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.
  13. 13.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The children played cricket after school.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  14. 14.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Catch the ball!” ___ Ananya.
    (a) giggled (b) whispered (c) shouted
  15. 15.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the exam has begun___” whispered Ananya.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is angry? (a) Maria laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (b) Maria was angry. (c) Maria folded her arms and glared at her brother.
  18. 18.Which sense does this line use?
    “Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  19. 19.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The snow was a white blanket on the hills. (b) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (c) We ate rice and dal for dinner.
  20. 20.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The snow was a white blanket on the hills. (b) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (c) Her smile was as bright as the sun.
  21. 21.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) cold (b) hot (c) loud
  22. 22.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan was really angry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  23. 23.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.”
    (a) angry (b) cold (c) bored
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) fine (b) polished (c) nice
  25. 25.What makes the sound “moo”? (a) a cow (b) raindrops (c) a jump into a pool
  26. 26.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crispy dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) crispy (b) crackled (c) dosa
  27. 27.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is angry? (a) Fatima laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (b) Fatima stamped her foot and slammed the door. (c) Fatima was angry.
  28. 28.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sneha gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) happy (b) hungry (c) angry
  29. 29.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) enormous (b) nice (c) fine
  30. 30.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill. (b) The thunder crashed and roared. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  31. 31.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Riya ___ a crunchy apple on the bus.”
    (a) munched (b) ate (c) made
  32. 32.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (b) The kitten’s fur felt like silk. (c) The stars were diamonds in the night sky.
  33. 33.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Yash is angry? (a) Yash folded his arms and glared at his brother. (b) Yash was angry. (c) Yash licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  34. 34.Which strong verb means “took tiny little bites”? (a) nibbled (b) dashed (c) wandered
  35. 35.What makes the sound “clang”? (a) a clock (b) a sheep (c) a steel plate falling
  36. 36.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The baby slept in the afternoon. (b) The pillow was as soft as a cloud. (c) The library is a treasure chest of stories.
  37. 37.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The pillow was as soft as a cloud.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  38. 38.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “We ___ home through the deep mud.”
    (a) trudged (b) walked (c) had
  39. 39.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bitter gourd tasted bitter.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) taste
  40. 40.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Imran laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) scared (b) happy (c) angry

Answer key

  1. Rohan kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  2. whoosh
  3. a horse
  4. Joseph kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  5. giggled
  6. The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  7. trudged
  8. a microwave
  9. neither
  10. blazed
  11. brave
  12. The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.
  13. neither
  14. shouted
  15. a comma (,)
  16. sight
  17. Maria folded her arms and glared at her brother.
  18. smell
  19. The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  20. The snow was a white blanket on the hills.
  21. cold
  22. telling
  23. bored
  24. polished
  25. a cow
  26. crispy
  27. Fatima stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  28. hungry
  29. enormous
  30. The thunder crashed and roared.
  31. munched
  32. The stars were diamonds in the night sky.
  33. Yash folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  34. nibbled
  35. a steel plate falling
  36. The pillow was as soft as a cloud.
  37. simile
  38. trudged
  39. taste
  40. happy

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