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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 443 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is scared? (a) Kabir was scared. (b) Kabir’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (c) Kabir sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  2. 2.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The camera went click at the party.”
    (a) click (b) camera (c) party
  3. 3.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My goldfish has gone missing,” ___ Ishaan.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  4. 4.What makes the sound “ding-dong”? (a) a jump into a pool (b) a sparrow (c) a doorbell
  5. 5.Which sense does this line use?
    “The cactus was prickly when I touched it.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) hearing
  6. 6.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) moo (b) garden (c) window
  7. 7.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The tiny ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) carried (b) ant (c) tiny
  8. 8.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tick-tock (b) chair (c) garden
  9. 9.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Rohan ___ crossly under his breath.”
    (a) came (b) spoke (c) muttered
  10. 10.What makes the sound “crunch”? (a) an owl (b) a snake (c) a crisp papad
  11. 11.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet”, giggled Maria. (b) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet” giggled Maria. (c) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Maria.
  12. 12.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) cheeky
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) taste
  14. 14.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) okay (b) golden (c) good
  15. 15.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  16. 16.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The snake gave an angry ___ and slid away.”
    (a) woof (b) pop (c) hiss
  17. 17.Which strong verb means “looked closely at something hard to see”? (a) tiptoed (b) tumbled (c) peered
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is happy? (a) Arjun beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (b) Arjun was happy. (c) Arjun folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  19. 19.Which sense does this line use?
    “Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) sight
  20. 20.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The old bread was as hard as a rock.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) taste
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) sight
  23. 23.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya felt very sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  24. 24.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Your silly face makes me laugh___” giggled Aryan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  25. 25.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleek car zoomed past us.”
    (a) zoomed (b) car (c) sleek
  26. 26.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The narrow road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) road (b) twisted (c) narrow
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) smell
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) hearing
  29. 29.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.”
    (a) tired (b) happy (c) sad
  30. 30.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Nani ___ sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) put (b) did (c) sprinkled
  31. 31.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The busy market was a beehive. (b) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (c) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  32. 32.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “The bowler threw the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) hurled (b) leapt (c) wandered
  33. 33.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) crunch (b) table (c) window
  34. 34.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The muddy pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) pond (b) muddy (c) had
  35. 35.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.”
    (a) hungry (b) sad (c) cold
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The fog was a grey curtain over the town.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  37. 37.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The rooster crowed ___ at dawn.”
    (a) woof (b) ding-dong (c) cock-a-doodle-doo
  38. 38.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a rock”
    (a) fluffy (b) soft (c) hard
  39. 39.Which strong verb means “spoke very softly”? (a) staggered (b) gulped (c) whispered
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “That joke is so funny” giggled Aisha. (b) “That joke is so funny,” giggled Aisha. (c) That joke is so funny, giggled Aisha.

Answer key

  1. Kabir’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.
  2. click
  3. sobbed
  4. a doorbell
  5. touch
  6. moo
  7. tiny
  8. tick-tock
  9. muttered
  10. a crisp papad
  11. “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Maria.
  12. cheeky
  13. taste
  14. golden
  15. metaphor
  16. hiss
  17. peered
  18. Arjun beamed and hugged everyone in sight.
  19. sight
  20. simile
  21. taste
  22. hearing
  23. telling
  24. a comma (,)
  25. sleek
  26. narrow
  27. smell
  28. taste
  29. sad
  30. sprinkled
  31. The busy market was a beehive.
  32. hurled
  33. crunch
  34. muddy
  35. cold
  36. metaphor
  37. cock-a-doodle-doo
  38. hard
  39. whispered
  40. “That joke is so funny,” giggled Aisha.

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