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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 445 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The children jumped into the pool with a splash.”
    (a) children (b) splash (c) pool
  2. 2.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Arjun’s cheek.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) scared
  3. 3.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  4. 4.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The dry logs crackle in the campfire.”
    (a) crackle (b) logs (c) dry
  5. 5.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fluffy kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) fluffy (b) kitten (c) curled
  6. 6.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “Rohan spoke crossly under his breath.”
    (a) muttered (b) munched (c) raced
  7. 7.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) sight
  8. 8.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aisha threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!””
    (a) angry (b) tired (c) bored
  9. 9.What makes the sound “quack”? (a) a duck (b) a microwave (c) a frog
  10. 10.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (b) The river water felt icy on my feet. (c) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  11. 11.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is hungry? (a) Rohan was hungry. (b) Rohan shivered and stamped his feet in the snow. (c) Rohan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  12. 12.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “Grandpa walked through the park after dinner.”
    (a) muttered (b) strolled (c) soared
  13. 13.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The speckled owl hooted from the branch.”
    (a) hooted (b) owl (c) speckled
  14. 14.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) bitter (b) sour (c) sweet
  15. 15.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The icy wind howled all night.”
    (a) howled (b) wind (c) icy
  16. 16.Which strong verb could replace “put” in this sentence?
    “Nani put sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) giggled (b) sprinkled (c) tiptoed
  17. 17.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy___” sobbed Aisha.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  18. 18.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shimmering peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) peacock (b) spread (c) shimmering
  19. 19.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Where did you put my blue pencil” asked Dev. (b) Where did you put my blue pencil? asked Dev. (c) “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Dev.
  20. 20.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen. (b) The wet soap slipped from my hands. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  21. 21.Which strong verb means “moved slowly and quietly”? (a) blazed (b) peered (c) crept
  22. 22.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “It rained all night in our town.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  23. 23.Which strong verb means “took a very quick look”? (a) dashed (b) scribbled (c) glanced
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (b) The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room. (c) The new bicycle shone bright red.
  25. 25.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Dad gave a loud achoo in the dusty room.”
    (a) achoo (b) room (c) dusty
  26. 26.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The baby giggled when Dad made funny noises. (b) I felt the cool breeze on my face. (c) The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.
  27. 27.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) garden (b) window (c) achoo
  28. 28.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “May I borrow your eraser___” asked Rohan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  29. 29.Which strong verb means “threw lightly”? (a) scribbled (b) crawled (c) tossed
  30. 30.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) striped
  31. 31.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The diver ___ into the deep pool.”
    (a) plunged (b) came (c) fell
  32. 32.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (b) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  33. 33.Which strong verb could replace “went” in this sentence?
    “The cat went quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) crept (b) gobbled (c) gulped
  34. 34.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (b) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice. (c) The train left the station at nine.
  35. 35.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Nobody came to my party, sobbed Diya. (b) “Nobody came to my party,” sobbed Diya. (c) “Nobody came to my party” sobbed Diya.
  36. 36.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sneha was sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  37. 37.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The pillow was as soft as a cloud.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  38. 38.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The horse gave a neigh in the stable.”
    (a) stable (b) horse (c) neigh
  39. 39.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The frogs ___ all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) croak (b) woof (c) chirp
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My kite is torn to pieces”, sobbed Joseph. (b) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Joseph. (c) My kite is torn to pieces, sobbed Joseph.

Answer key

  1. splash
  2. sad
  3. showing
  4. crackle
  5. fluffy
  6. muttered
  7. smell
  8. angry
  9. a duck
  10. Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  11. Rohan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  12. strolled
  13. speckled
  14. sweet
  15. icy
  16. sprinkled
  17. a comma (,)
  18. shimmering
  19. “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Dev.
  20. The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  21. crept
  22. neither
  23. glanced
  24. The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.
  25. achoo
  26. The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.
  27. achoo
  28. a question mark (?)
  29. tossed
  30. striped
  31. plunged
  32. Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  33. crept
  34. The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  35. “Nobody came to my party,” sobbed Diya.
  36. telling
  37. simile
  38. neigh
  39. croak
  40. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Joseph.

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