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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 453 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tall (b) river (c) roar
  2. 2.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (b) The medicine had a bitter taste. (c) The fish market had a strong smell.
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) smell
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Arjun’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is cold? (a) Neel rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers. (b) Neel counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (c) Neel was cold.
  6. 6.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “That joke is so funny,” giggled Aarav. (b) That joke is so funny, giggled Aarav. (c) “That joke is so funny” giggled Aarav.
  7. 7.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The fog was a grey curtain over the town. (b) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice. (c) Meera watered the plants in the morning.
  8. 8.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Look out, the shelf is falling”! shouted Fatima. (b) Look out, the shelf is falling! shouted Fatima. (c) “Look out, the shelf is falling!” shouted Fatima.
  9. 9.Which strong verb means “laughed in a light, silly way”? (a) crept (b) gobbled (c) giggled
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ tree towered over the house.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) gigantic
  11. 11.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) okay (b) striped (c) fine
  12. 12.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley. (b) The train left the station at nine. (c) Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.
  13. 13.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The oranges fell out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) scribbled (b) tumbled (c) strolled
  14. 14.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  15. 15.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (b) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (c) The medicine had a bitter taste.
  16. 16.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The diver ___ into the deep pool.”
    (a) plunged (b) fell (c) did
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “The warm sand tickled my toes.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) hearing
  18. 18.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fish market had a strong smell.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) smell
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Pooja drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) sight
  21. 21.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Let us keep the surprise a secret___” whispered Tenzin.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  22. 22.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a feather”
    (a) dark (b) heavy (c) light
  23. 23.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) whoosh (c) garden
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The sea tasted very salty. (b) The cactus was prickly when I touched it. (c) Lightning flashed across the night sky.
  25. 25.Which sense does this line use?
    “The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  26. 26.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is cold? (a) Saanvi was cold. (b) Saanvi laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (c) Saanvi rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.
  27. 27.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Riya ___ a crunchy apple on the bus.”
    (a) ate (b) munched (c) went
  28. 28.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) vroom (b) slowly (c) garden
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “I felt the cool breeze on my face.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) touch
  30. 30.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Aarav ___ at the clock and hurried out.”
    (a) came (b) looked (c) glanced
  31. 31.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) okay (b) sticky (c) fine
  32. 32.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Manav was scared.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  33. 33.Which strong verb means “burned brightly and fiercely”? (a) tumbled (b) munched (c) blazed
  34. 34.What makes the sound “tick-tock”? (a) a clock (b) a microwave (c) a doorbell
  35. 35.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) garden (b) baa (c) green
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The baby slept in the afternoon.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  37. 37.Which sense does this line use?
    “Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) sight
  38. 38.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The runner was as quick as lightning. (b) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (c) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.
  39. 39.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My little sister is as busy as a bee. (b) The fog was a grey curtain over the town. (c) It rained all night in our town.
  40. 40.What makes the sound “knock”? (a) a crisp papad (b) a clock (c) a visitor at the door

Answer key

  1. roar
  2. The fish market had a strong smell.
  3. smell
  4. showing
  5. Neel rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.
  6. “That joke is so funny,” giggled Aarav.
  7. The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice.
  8. “Look out, the shelf is falling!” shouted Fatima.
  9. giggled
  10. gigantic
  11. striped
  12. Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.
  13. tumbled
  14. simile
  15. The medicine had a bitter taste.
  16. plunged
  17. touch
  18. smell
  19. showing
  20. touch
  21. a comma (,)
  22. light
  23. whoosh
  24. The sea tasted very salty.
  25. taste
  26. Saanvi rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.
  27. munched
  28. vroom
  29. touch
  30. glanced
  31. sticky
  32. telling
  33. blazed
  34. a clock
  35. baa
  36. neither
  37. sight
  38. The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.
  39. My little sister is as busy as a bee.
  40. a visitor at the door

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