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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 470 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.What makes the sound “sizzle”? (a) pakoras in hot oil (b) a leaking tap (c) the wind
  2. 2.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Kabir ___ the door when he was cross.”
    (a) had (b) shut (c) slammed
  3. 3.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is scared? (a) Saanvi’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home. (b) Saanvi froze and held her breath as the floor creaked. (c) Saanvi was scared.
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tara felt very scared.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  5. 5.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Aarav ___ at the clock and hurried out.”
    (a) had (b) glanced (c) looked
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (b) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (c) I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.
  7. 7.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) window (b) table (c) clang
  8. 8.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The dry logs crackle in the campfire.”
    (a) logs (b) crackle (c) dry
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Arjun was really tired.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  10. 10.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost child ___ until his mother found him.”
    (a) cried (b) sobbed (c) had
  11. 11.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (b) The library is a treasure chest of stories. (c) Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.
  12. 12.What makes the sound “crackle”? (a) a doorbell (b) a campfire (c) a sneeze
  13. 13.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) We heard the train whistle far away. (b) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty. (c) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  14. 14.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) okay (b) rough (c) good
  15. 15.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My sandcastle got washed away___” sobbed Farhan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) patchwork
  17. 17.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “Rohan spoke crossly under his breath.”
    (a) trudged (b) tossed (c) muttered
  18. 18.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ garden smelled of roses.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) blooming
  19. 19.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is hungry? (a) Joseph was hungry. (b) Joseph’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home. (c) Joseph’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “The temple bells rang out loudly.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) hearing
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “The clay cup felt hot in my hands.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) sight
  22. 22.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “Dad threw the keys onto the table.”
    (a) tossed (b) dashed (c) nibbled
  23. 23.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “How many stars are in the sky___” asked Tara.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  24. 24.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Our teacher is a fountain of ideas.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  25. 25.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The girls ___ at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) giggled (b) made (c) laughed
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wet soap slipped from my hands.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) okay (b) fine (c) cheeky
  28. 28.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” ___ Fatima.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  29. 29.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (b) The sea tasted very salty. (c) The earth smelled lovely after the first rain.
  30. 30.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is tired? (a) Ishaan was tired. (b) Ishaan’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again. (c) Ishaan froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.
  31. 31.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shaggy dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) barked (b) dog (c) shaggy
  32. 32.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat___” giggled Saanvi.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  33. 33.Which strong verb means “spoke very softly”? (a) trudged (b) peered (c) whispered
  34. 34.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet___” giggled Neel.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  35. 35.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Ishaan ___ a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) came (b) scribbled (c) wrote
  36. 36.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Nobody came to my party, sobbed Ananya. (b) “Nobody came to my party” sobbed Ananya. (c) “Nobody came to my party,” sobbed Ananya.
  37. 37.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Stop that runaway goat___” shouted Saanvi.
    (a) an exclamation mark (!) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  38. 38.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) crowded
  39. 39.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Hee hee, stop tickling me, giggled Kabir. (b) “Hee hee, stop tickling me” giggled Kabir. (c) “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” giggled Kabir.
  40. 40.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The puppy gave a happy woof at the gate.”
    (a) woof (b) gate (c) puppy

Answer key

  1. pakoras in hot oil
  2. slammed
  3. Saanvi froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  4. telling
  5. glanced
  6. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  7. clang
  8. crackle
  9. telling
  10. sobbed
  11. Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.
  12. a campfire
  13. The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.
  14. rough
  15. a comma (,)
  16. patchwork
  17. muttered
  18. blooming
  19. Joseph’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  20. hearing
  21. touch
  22. tossed
  23. a question mark (?)
  24. metaphor
  25. giggled
  26. touch
  27. cheeky
  28. asked
  29. Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.
  30. Ishaan’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.
  31. shaggy
  32. a comma (,)
  33. whispered
  34. a comma (,)
  35. scribbled
  36. “Nobody came to my party,” sobbed Ananya.
  37. an exclamation mark (!)
  38. crowded
  39. “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” giggled Kabir.
  40. woof

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