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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 472 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which strong verb means “walked unsteadily, almost falling”? (a) grabbed (b) staggered (c) giggled
  2. 2.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (b) The night was as dark as ink. (c) The fog was a grey curtain over the town.
  3. 3.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Saanvi. (b) My kite is torn to pieces, sobbed Saanvi. (c) “My kite is torn to pieces” sobbed Saanvi.
  4. 4.What makes the sound “meow”? (a) a frog (b) a cat (c) a sneeze
  5. 5.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Why is the sky blue___” asked Aryan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  6. 6.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The scissors went ___ as Mum cut the thread.”
    (a) neigh (b) quack (c) snip
  7. 7.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night. (b) The lemon juice tasted very sour. (c) The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  8. 8.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “The children looked at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) muttered (b) nibbled (c) stared
  9. 9.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tara felt very happy.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ wind howled all night.”
    (a) good (b) icy (c) okay
  11. 11.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “We walked home through the deep mud.”
    (a) whispered (b) gobbled (c) trudged
  12. 12.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) clang (b) chair (c) window
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Meera. (b) “Shh, the film is starting” whispered Meera. (c) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Meera.
  14. 14.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is hungry? (a) Priya stamped her foot and slammed the door. (b) Priya was hungry. (c) Priya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  15. 15.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The dry logs crackle in the campfire.”
    (a) crackle (b) dry (c) logs
  16. 16.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the film is starting”, whispered Ishaan. (b) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Ishaan. (c) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Ishaan.
  17. 17.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Manav’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) tired
  18. 18.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) taste
  19. 19.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The golden sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) rose (b) golden (c) sun
  20. 20.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) mango (b) crackle (c) slowly
  21. 21.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is sad? (a) Kavya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet. (b) A tear rolled slowly down Kavya’s cheek. (c) Kavya was sad.
  22. 22.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aisha grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) happy (b) bored (c) hungry
  23. 23.What makes the sound “roar”? (a) a lion (b) a microwave (c) raindrops
  24. 24.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) My little brother is a chatterbox. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) The runner was as quick as lightning.
  25. 25.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My goldfish has gone missing___” sobbed Kabir.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  26. 26.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Yash’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) happy (b) tired (c) sad
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The booming thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) booming (b) thunder (c) shook
  28. 28.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Ha ha, you have milk on your nose, giggled Maria. (b) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Maria. (c) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose”, giggled Maria.
  29. 29.Which sentence is a simile? (a) It rained all night in our town. (b) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder. (c) Her bedroom is a pigsty.
  30. 30.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a peacock”
    (a) proud (b) humble (c) shy
  31. 31.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) table (b) drip (c) gentle
  32. 32.Which sentence is a simile? (a) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (b) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers. (c) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.
  33. 33.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Your silly face makes me laugh”, giggled Aryan. (b) “Your silly face makes me laugh,” giggled Aryan. (c) Your silly face makes me laugh, giggled Aryan.
  34. 34.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night. (b) A whiff of incense floated from the temple. (c) I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  35. 35.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Simran’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.”
    (a) angry (b) hungry (c) bored
  36. 36.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dad ___ the keys onto the table.”
    (a) tossed (b) threw (c) came
  37. 37.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) sight
  38. 38.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The creaky stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) stairs (b) creaky (c) groaned
  39. 39.Which sense does this line use?
    “The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) taste
  40. 40.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shaggy dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) barked (b) dog (c) shaggy

Answer key

  1. staggered
  2. The fog was a grey curtain over the town.
  3. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Saanvi.
  4. a cat
  5. a question mark (?)
  6. snip
  7. The golden sand glittered in the sun.
  8. stared
  9. telling
  10. icy
  11. trudged
  12. clang
  13. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Meera.
  14. Priya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  15. crackle
  16. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Ishaan.
  17. tired
  18. touch
  19. golden
  20. crackle
  21. A tear rolled slowly down Kavya’s cheek.
  22. happy
  23. a lion
  24. My little brother is a chatterbox.
  25. a comma (,)
  26. sad
  27. booming
  28. “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Maria.
  29. Dad’s voice boomed like thunder.
  30. proud
  31. drip
  32. Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.
  33. “Your silly face makes me laugh,” giggled Aryan.
  34. A whiff of incense floated from the temple.
  35. angry
  36. tossed
  37. taste
  38. creaky
  39. taste
  40. shaggy

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