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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 479 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which strong verb could replace “shut” in this sentence?
    “Kabir shut the door when he was cross.”
    (a) glanced (b) slammed (c) sipped
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) smell
  3. 3.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Our cat lets out a sad meow at night.”
    (a) night (b) cat (c) meow
  4. 4.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “Dev walked past his sleeping baby sister.”
    (a) gulped (b) tiptoed (c) sprinkled
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is sad? (a) Tenzin beamed and hugged everyone in sight. (b) A tear rolled slowly down Tenzin’s cheek. (c) Tenzin was sad.
  6. 6.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The balloon burst with a ___.”
    (a) pop (b) crackle (c) slurp
  7. 7.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kabir felt very happy.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  9. 9.Which word fits the gap best?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud,” ___ Vihaan.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  10. 10.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) brave (b) soft (c) slow
  11. 11.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The baby slept like a log.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  12. 12.Which strong verb could replace “moved” in this sentence?
    “The baby moved across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) munched (b) crawled (c) giggled
  13. 13.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pop (b) quickly (c) tall
  14. 14.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the film is starting___” whispered Tenzin.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  15. 15.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pigs oink in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) pigs (b) muddy (c) oink
  16. 16.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Meera was really angry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  17. 17.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The booming thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) thunder (b) shook (c) booming
  18. 18.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The little lamb gave a soft baa.”
    (a) lamb (b) soft (c) baa
  19. 19.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) happy (b) scared (c) cold
  20. 20.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) cuddly
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) tiny
  22. 22.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “The eagle flew above the hills.”
    (a) crawled (b) whispered (c) soared
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) enormous
  24. 24.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Diya folded her arms and glared at her brother.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  25. 25.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” ___ Ananya.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) asked
  26. 26.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) patchwork
  27. 27.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as snow”
    (a) black (b) white (c) noisy
  28. 28.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Rohan’s cheek.”
    (a) sad (b) hungry (c) cold
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) sight
  30. 30.Which sense does this line use?
    “The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  31. 31.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ishaan was really bored.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  32. 32.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” ___ Aisha.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  33. 33.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) cock-a-doodle-doo (b) pencil (c) teacher
  34. 34.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) hiss (b) window (c) tall
  35. 35.What makes the sound “baa”? (a) pakoras in hot oil (b) a sheep (c) a clock
  36. 36.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The moon was a silver plate in the sky. (b) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (c) The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  37. 37.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden. (b) We heard the train whistle far away. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  38. 38.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rusty bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) bus (b) rusty (c) rattled
  39. 39.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ garden smelled of roses.”
    (a) fine (b) blooming (c) good
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Imran. (b) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Imran. (c) “Shh, the film is starting” whispered Imran.

Answer key

  1. slammed
  2. smell
  3. meow
  4. tiptoed
  5. A tear rolled slowly down Tenzin’s cheek.
  6. pop
  7. simile
  8. telling
  9. sobbed
  10. brave
  11. simile
  12. crawled
  13. pop
  14. a comma (,)
  15. oink
  16. telling
  17. booming
  18. baa
  19. happy
  20. cuddly
  21. tiny
  22. soared
  23. enormous
  24. showing
  25. whispered
  26. patchwork
  27. white
  28. sad
  29. taste
  30. smell
  31. telling
  32. giggled
  33. cock-a-doodle-doo
  34. hiss
  35. a sheep
  36. The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  37. The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  38. rusty
  39. blooming
  40. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Imran.

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