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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 483 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (b) The thunder crashed and roared. (c) The wet soap slipped from my hands.
  2. 2.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) made (b) scrubbed (c) cleaned
  3. 3.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Nobody came to my party,” ___ Simran.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  4. 4.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fiery chilli made my eyes water.”
    (a) chilli (b) made (c) fiery
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aryan is cold? (a) Aryan’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter. (b) Aryan’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists. (c) Aryan was cold.
  6. 6.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bitter gourd tasted bitter.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) taste
  7. 7.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sneha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) happy (b) angry (c) hungry
  8. 8.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ peacock spread its tail.”
    (a) fine (b) nice (c) shimmering
  9. 9.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The enormous elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) elephant (b) stomped (c) enormous
  10. 10.Which strong verb means “took tiny little bites”? (a) nibbled (b) wandered (c) crept
  11. 11.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a rock”
    (a) soft (b) hard (c) fluffy
  12. 12.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) hot (b) loud (c) cold
  13. 13.Which strong verb means “looked for a long time without moving”? (a) stared (b) tossed (c) gulped
  14. 14.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The doorbell went ___ at noon.”
    (a) pitter-patter (b) tick-tock (c) ding-dong
  15. 15.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The runner was as quick as lightning.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  16. 16.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Farhan is happy? (a) Farhan’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (b) Farhan was happy. (c) Farhan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  17. 17.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) golden
  18. 18.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) happy
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tara was really hungry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  20. 20.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) went (b) strolled (c) walked
  21. 21.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “The children looked at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) plunged (b) clutched (c) stared
  22. 22.Which strong verb means “burned brightly and fiercely”? (a) shouted (b) blazed (c) munched
  23. 23.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My sandcastle got washed away___” sobbed Sahil.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  24. 24.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The wrestler was as strong as an ox.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  25. 25.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Nisha is happy? (a) Nisha laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (b) Nisha was happy. (c) Nisha’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.
  26. 26.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Who painted this lovely picture?” ___ Tenzin.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  27. 27.Which strong verb means “drank in tiny mouthfuls”? (a) sobbed (b) sipped (c) tossed
  28. 28.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) dazzling (b) fine (c) nice
  29. 29.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The bonfire ___ on Lohri night.”
    (a) came (b) blazed (c) burned
  30. 30.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) okay (b) fine (c) shaggy
  31. 31.Which strong verb could replace “cried” in this sentence?
    “The lost child cried until his mother found him.”
    (a) glanced (b) sobbed (c) fluttered
  32. 32.Which sense does this line use?
    “I tasted the soup and added more salt.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) touch
  33. 33.What makes the sound “cock-a-doodle-doo”? (a) a rooster (b) a cat (c) a camera
  34. 34.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) polished (b) nice (c) fine
  35. 35.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) gentle (b) quickly (c) splash
  36. 36.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The warm sand tickled my toes. (b) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (c) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aryan was really bored.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  38. 38.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Yash’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  39. 39.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whiff of incense floated from the temple.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) taste
  40. 40.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) table (b) meow (c) kind

Answer key

  1. The thunder crashed and roared.
  2. scrubbed
  3. sobbed
  4. fiery
  5. Aryan’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  6. taste
  7. happy
  8. shimmering
  9. enormous
  10. nibbled
  11. hard
  12. cold
  13. stared
  14. ding-dong
  15. simile
  16. Farhan grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  17. golden
  18. bored
  19. telling
  20. strolled
  21. stared
  22. blazed
  23. a comma (,)
  24. simile
  25. Nisha laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  26. asked
  27. sipped
  28. dazzling
  29. blazed
  30. shaggy
  31. sobbed
  32. taste
  33. a rooster
  34. polished
  35. splash
  36. The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  37. telling
  38. showing
  39. smell
  40. meow

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