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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 486 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Do not tell anyone about the party,” ___ Manav.
    (a) shouted (b) asked (c) whispered
  2. 2.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, we are in the library,” ___ Imran.
    (a) whispered (b) asked (c) shouted
  3. 3.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Dad is a walking dictionary. (b) The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds. (c) It rained all night in our town.
  4. 4.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” giggled Nisha. (b) “Hee hee, stop tickling me”, giggled Nisha. (c) Hee hee, stop tickling me, giggled Nisha.
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Vihaan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  6. 6.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cushion sank under me.”
    (a) okay (b) squishy (c) fine
  7. 7.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The girls ___ at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) made (b) giggled (c) laughed
  8. 8.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is cold? (a) Kavya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap. (b) Kavya was cold. (c) Kavya’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  9. 9.Which sense does this line use?
    “The old door creaked as it opened.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  10. 10.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Catch the ball___” shouted Kabir.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) A whistle blew at the start of the race. (b) The river water felt icy on my feet. (c) The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  12. 12.What makes the sound “roar”? (a) a lion (b) a snake (c) a pig
  13. 13.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The cactus was prickly when I touched it. (b) A whiff of incense floated from the temple. (c) The bees buzzed around the hive.
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) sight
  15. 15.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) sleepy
  16. 16.Which strong verb means “moved slowly and quietly”? (a) stared (b) slammed (c) crept
  17. 17.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The crispy dosa crackled on the pan.”
    (a) crispy (b) crackled (c) dosa
  18. 18.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The wet soap slipped from my hands. (b) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (c) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.
  19. 19.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The clay cup felt hot in my hands. (b) The golden sand glittered in the sun. (c) The old door creaked as it opened.
  20. 20.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) croak (c) garden
  21. 21.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (b) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (c) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  22. 22.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) sour (b) bitter (c) sweet
  23. 23.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Grandpa reads the newspaper every day.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  24. 24.What makes the sound “buzz”? (a) a bee (b) a microwave (c) the wind
  25. 25.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) gentle (c) baa
  26. 26.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is happy? (a) Manav froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (b) Manav was happy. (c) Manav grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) narrow
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is sad? (a) Tears filled Ishaan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor. (b) Ishaan was sad. (c) Ishaan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  29. 29.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The muddy pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) had (b) pond (c) muddy
  30. 30.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Arjun was angry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  31. 31.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) The wet soap slipped from my hands.
  32. 32.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha folded her arms and glared at her brother.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ stairs groaned under our feet.”
    (a) okay (b) fine (c) creaky
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “I looked at the white peak of the mountain.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) sight
  35. 35.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The rooster crowed ___ at dawn.”
    (a) cock-a-doodle-doo (b) boom (c) buzz
  36. 36.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The glassy lake reflected the hills.”
    (a) lake (b) reflected (c) glassy
  37. 37.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Dev is cold? (a) Dev was cold. (b) Dev sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (c) Dev shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.
  38. 38.What makes the sound “drip”? (a) a visitor at the door (b) an owl (c) a leaking tap
  39. 39.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) fine (b) gloomy (c) nice
  40. 40.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The snow was a white blanket on the hills. (b) The old bread was as hard as a rock. (c) Kabir finished his homework early.

Answer key

  1. whispered
  2. whispered
  3. Dad is a walking dictionary.
  4. “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” giggled Nisha.
  5. showing
  6. squishy
  7. giggled
  8. Kavya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.
  9. hearing
  10. an exclamation mark (!)
  11. The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  12. a lion
  13. A whiff of incense floated from the temple.
  14. touch
  15. sleepy
  16. crept
  17. crispy
  18. The wet soap slipped from my hands.
  19. The clay cup felt hot in my hands.
  20. croak
  21. I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  22. sweet
  23. neither
  24. a bee
  25. baa
  26. Manav grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  27. narrow
  28. Tears filled Ishaan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.
  29. muddy
  30. telling
  31. The old door creaked as it opened.
  32. showing
  33. creaky
  34. sight
  35. cock-a-doodle-doo
  36. glassy
  37. Dev shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.
  38. a leaking tap
  39. gloomy
  40. The old bread was as hard as a rock.

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