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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 494 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “Meera ran to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) munched (b) dashed (c) nibbled
  2. 2.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) strolled (b) walked (c) went
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whiff of incense floated from the temple.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) smell
  4. 4.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) nice (b) sticky (c) okay
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Priya’s cheek.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  6. 6.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Manav was tired.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  7. 7.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The fog was a grey curtain over the town. (b) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (c) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder.
  8. 8.What makes the sound “woof”? (a) a frog (b) a dog (c) a snake
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is hungry? (a) Tenzin was hungry. (b) Tenzin licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in. (c) Tenzin stamped his foot and slammed the door.
  10. 10.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Look out, the shelf is falling!” shouted Diya. (b) “Look out, the shelf is falling”! shouted Diya. (c) Look out, the shelf is falling! shouted Diya.
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) A whiff of incense floated from the temple. (b) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (c) We heard the train whistle far away.
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is scared? (a) Fatima was scared. (b) Fatima sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing. (c) Fatima gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.
  13. 13.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa.”
    (a) angry (b) bored (c) tired
  14. 14.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The children ___ at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) stared (b) went (c) looked
  15. 15.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) rusty
  16. 16.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The coach ___ to us from across the big field.”
    (a) got (b) spoke (c) shouted
  17. 17.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  18. 18.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Arjun kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) hungry (b) bored (c) cold
  19. 19.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “The children looked at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) clutched (b) stared (c) sipped
  20. 20.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” ___ Maria.
    (a) whispered (b) shouted (c) asked
  21. 21.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The wind went whoosh through the trees.”
    (a) trees (b) whoosh (c) wind
  22. 22.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The cheeky monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) cheeky (b) stole (c) monkey
  23. 23.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) lazy (b) silent (c) busy
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (b) The glue felt sticky between my fingers. (c) I heard waves crashing on the rocks.
  25. 25.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Rohan’s cheek.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  26. 26.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “We ate rice and dal for dinner.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  27. 27.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The bus stopped at the school gate.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  28. 28.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) muddy (b) good (c) okay
  29. 29.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ garden smelled of roses.”
    (a) fine (b) good (c) blooming
  30. 30.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ananya is bored? (a) Ananya was bored. (b) Ananya sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (c) Ananya stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “I felt the cool breeze on my face.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) touch
  32. 32.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake___” whispered Saanvi.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  33. 33.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Hee hee, stop tickling me___” giggled Farhan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  34. 34.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ owl hooted from the branch.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) speckled
  35. 35.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The earth smelled lovely after the first rain. (b) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (c) The pressure cooker hissed three times.
  36. 36.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock” giggled Imran. (b) Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock, giggled Imran. (c) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Imran.
  37. 37.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The dry logs ___ in the campfire.”
    (a) thud (b) crackle (c) achoo
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) scared (b) angry (c) cold
  39. 39.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap___” whispered Diya.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  40. 40.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) slow (b) brave (c) soft

Answer key

  1. dashed
  2. strolled
  3. smell
  4. sticky
  5. showing
  6. telling
  7. The fog was a grey curtain over the town.
  8. a dog
  9. Tenzin licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  10. “Look out, the shelf is falling!” shouted Diya.
  11. I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  12. Fatima gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.
  13. tired
  14. stared
  15. rusty
  16. shouted
  17. simile
  18. bored
  19. stared
  20. whispered
  21. whoosh
  22. cheeky
  23. busy
  24. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  25. showing
  26. neither
  27. neither
  28. muddy
  29. blooming
  30. Ananya sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  31. touch
  32. a comma (,)
  33. a comma (,)
  34. speckled
  35. The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.
  36. “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Imran.
  37. crackle
  38. scared
  39. a comma (,)
  40. brave

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